This was both sweet and heartbreaking. I definitely feel bad for Ron in this. But I liked how, instead of making him a villain, you made him the silently supportive friend.

I kind of feel bad for Ron and at the same time want to smack him for making Harry feel bad. This was a good chapter. Good job.

This was a really cute story. I like Harry's awkwardness and oblivious feelings. Your portrayal of Hermione was also very good. Definitely canon-like characterization. Good job on that.

This was sweet.
Thank you.

This was ADORABLE and would totally fit the characters as I imagine them.

Aw man that was so nice. Well written. Beautiful flow. Your Harry/Hermione pairing is nice. Well done

So cutei wish it was longer.

Very cute, thank you.

Bon chapitre

beautiful, I just wish you have a sequel to this. Like OOTP and HBP

Thanks

Thanks

Nice mix of sweetness and canon. Since this is complete, we don't have 'Chekhov's Chamber of Chamberpots' :) Perhaps a sequel?

That was hideously awkward. :)

that was cute, and i can see them both being that nervous about everything. it was nice to see ron not be so horrible too. congratulations on your first story!