Reviews for Rise of the Great Demon
Spiritree0513 chapter 18 . 7/25
I re-read all the stories and I still cannot find where spiderman and wanda started dating.
Stand with Ward and Queen chapter 18 . 7/25
Good chapter.

Loved all the little references to the doppelgangers. Poor Hope. *Chuckles*

Mick begging to stay had me laughing.

Great gift from Strange. Poor Barry, Parker and Frodo.

Looking forward to next chapter.
Chaos Sorcerer chapter 18 . 7/25
Holy teary reunions, Aragorn. That was pretty much the best possible way to end things. So heartwarming for the three to get to talk their parents and uncle. Great deal of emotion there. So true about Tony, he can throw a hell of a party. Still find it kinda funny how Blood just hates everyone, must be a real loner at work. Laughed loud when Venom-84 gave his input on the black suit. Bet Oliver and Sara think Marc is also a little (as far as they know) off his rocker. That’d be interesting though, Moon Knight making Prometheus confess. Wonder if a scary, threatening Diana would be enough to scare off Steve’s many admirers. Ooooh, man that was burn to the Legends, surprised they didn’t go to the infirmary after that…actually on that thought, what the hell do they do now anyway? Just go with the flow of time and screw things up as they do? Your welcome on all those scenes, and very happy to help. Had a good laugh at all of them. Would’ve gone “to bad brothers” instead of “half-brothers” (Loki isn’t technically blood related to Thor) but it was still great. Aquaman gaping at Thor, imagine how Tom Curry would react if he learned that his superpower has been outclassed, but it’d still be noteworthy that only a god could beat him. Tony is right about one thing, the multiverse is weird. So you’ve decided on the guardian of the Soul Stone, and it’s Mordo like one of my suggestions way back when. Of course it wasn’t the method I imagined but still, a bodiless soul guarding the Stone that controls the souls of the multiverse seems fitting. Wonder how long it’ll be before Adam has his encounter with the Stone.

If Mack would be chosen as Director of SWORD, who would be Director of SHIELD? Fury I would imagine, or someone else? So Balthazar is changing his name to Balthazar Cage then? Wouldn’t Tony have made more reality breachers to give to Balthazar instead of Cisco? What power level will you have Arthur at in terms of strength, speed and durability? Something around pre-awakening Thor maybe? Did you not have scenes in mind for the X-Men characters? Will there be something between Tauriel and Legolas? Do you have a reason in mind on what she was doing all those years? I know this is probably one of those moments where you don’t want to question it, but how did Strange do that with the gifts?

With the points Gwen raised, can’t say I blame her for drinking. That’s actually pretty damn clever with the coke can. Would’ve thought Carol would clock Billy on the head for being so childish, but I guess since he’s an actual kid, she stayed her hand. The answer to how old she was would’ve probably taken him off guard. Veronica thinking Balthazar’s eccentricness and weirdness is sexy…well there has to be reason for her being in love with him I guess. Nice of Barry-Red to help Parker cope with what he’s seen during the time traveling. Surprised Superman didn’t also shout “language!”. Tony’s reaction to Bats was great. Dick move, Rachel…get it?…oh forget it. Clever quip about her being evil like dad. Getting scolded by Bats and Robin, that was fucking golden. Detective giving Jason some words to take to heart, wonder if he’ll take it to heart or if he’ll still become Red Hood. Glad you liked my idea with Knull. Another thing that could add on to that idea is that when Parker gets in desperate situations, like say he’s fighting someone way above his strength class, he feels his skin turn ice cold (as a sort of energy surges through his body) and suddenly gets a dramatic boost in power, sort of like in ‘Bleach’ when Ichigo got empowered by the Hollow part of him, when he didn’t realize what it was (little note, I’ve only seen up to the end of the Soul Society arc and that was a while ago). Also, the moment of Parker looking to see red eyes in the dark, it could’ve been erased from his mind and only gets glimpses of that moment in weird dreams. Ah Merlin and Arthur, the golden duo, I’ll never get sick of them. I liked that line, “You are America's Captain. Britain needs a Captain too now.” Have no idea what you’ll do next so I’m really looking forward to the post-credits. Saw PewDiePie’s video (God, it’s been ages since I last saw him), only about ten minutes before I had to stop but still it was so nice. That video that he showed of Shushant saying he was an introvert, the youngest, being pampered and not knowing how to talk, that’s me! I’d like to think I’ve improved in some areas there but essentially that is exactly how I would’ve described myself. Anyway, the guy seems so great and relatable, why did he have to pass so early in his life? Will try to finish the rest of it soon. Stay safe y’all. Update soon! Take care now, bye bye then.
Cer1992 chapter 17 . 7/25
Nice chapter. A little bummed that all of our heroes (save for the time-travelers) have no recollection of SuperThor, but it the time travel bits were done great nonetheless. Looking forward to the aftermath and post-credit scenes for your next installment in this series.
Guest chapter 18 . 7/25
You planning on turning Arthur into Captain Britain
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 18 . 7/25
Strange's gift to Parker, Barry-Red and Frodo was beyond heartwarming, allowing them to spend 5 minutes with their loved ones is the highest kindest gesture a hero can give. I'm worried though. How severe will the consequences of messing with Time be?
Arrowverse Fan 217 chapter 18 . 7/25
Lovely chapter man.

Those gifts were so sweet. I loved it.

No I can't wait for the post credits scenes, because those are always awesome.

You know, I have to say this: Every story in this series has been better and more epic than the previous. So well done buddy.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
Bl4ckHunter chapter 18 . 7/25
Nice ending.

Funny on Scott meeting Tauriel and Dawn's, Kory's and Hank's reactions at Steve and Mick's reactions at seeing Ghost Rider, reminded me of his reaction at seeing Firestorm in Superhero Fight Club.

And funny moment between Luke Cage and Balthazar, given that Nicolas uses 'Cage' as alias, * chuckles *

Both Venoms fighting against each other? That should be interesting.

Huh. The boxes show deceased parents. I probably should've suspected something like that, reminded me a bit of Deathly Hallows. Poor Parker, Barry and Frodo.

Well, up to see the post-credits scene.
Chaos Sorcerer chapter 17 . 7/24
…HOLY SHIT! Jesus fucking Christ! What the hell just happened?! Oh great, fucking time travel confusing me all over again! Thanks a lot, man! Fucking headaches. I think my favorite part was when Steve spoke the oath and his willpower proved even stronger than Dormammu for however brief. Great scene. That flash to Diana could’ve actually spurred him on to do the scene with Bucky that I made…or it would have, if it happened (well it did but he-oh fuck, headache!). You could’ve actually had scene of them together as they were fighting, with Diana joking, “this isn’t what I had in mind for date night.” My bad on the “demon” part not actually being in the anime, sorry, it’s been a long while since I saw the fight. Still, wouldn’t really consider that as something Dormammu would say, maybe if he had compared Thor-El to another powerful being, like maybe an Elder God or something, which could reference Thor’s birth mother from the comics. Man, that scene with future Parker…I don’t know what to say. You can tell he’s been through the ringer many, many times, so much that he kinda seemed broken but still hanging in there. Parker didn’t have to hide, if the suit has the capabilities of a Symbiote, then he should’ve been able to turn invisible. Also, Parker could’ve had tendrils sprout from his back to wrap around Merry and Pippin. Enjoyed the quipping and babbling you portrayed Parker with. Feel like Galactus was foreshadowed a bunch of times. That I can NOT wait for. There was a bit too many on the time travel, maybe if it was just Parker, Frodo and Sam or Barry-Red with Strange. Parker was the only one of real importance though to me through the whole thing, so him alone would’ve made more sense to me, everyone else just seemed unnecessary and just there, like they didn’t really contribute much, while Parker had his moment to choose between saving his Uncle and not gain powers or help his future self and learn what’s happened, instead he chose neither. But I loved the flashback to one of my favorite scenes in ‘LotR’, “I can't carry it for you...but I can carry you!" Wish the wider MCU universe, as in the alien races inhabiting the Space side of things, could come, which after an event like this (or, well, not like this since the near destruction of the multiverse and Dormammu appearing didn’t happen) could draw several eyes towards Earth. I mentioned a Skrull secret invasion which could lead to a multiverse wide secret invasion, the Kree can invade similar to how it did in ‘EMH’, they noticed the strength of Earth and decide to judge whether they’re worthy to join their empire. Without Ronan though, maybe if they had Mar-Vell’s half-Kree half-Eternal children, like in the comics, Genis-Vell and Phyla-Vell (manipulated from an early age to fight for the Kree empire, with Mar-Vell thinking they died, sort of like Myrrine thought of Alexios and Kassandra in ‘AC: Odyssey’). But since I’m uneducated on all things Kree in the MCU since a good amount of them showed up in ‘AoS’, my idea might not work. There’s also the Shi’ar but you’d have to talk to Max about that since they, and Gladiator, appear in his spinoff ‘All This for a Jacket’. If aliens start to invade, it could give rise to SWORD, which Daisy could be elected as director of. Again, just spouting ideas, don’t know if they’ll work out. That would actually be a laugh if Kal learns of his older, murdering, biblical figure doppelgänger. Constantine and Jason/Etrigan could have met him so they could bring it up (Jason could even admit he had a thing with one of the demons in Hell, and that demon being Maze, who he is also partly afraid of). You could also have Ollie be the doppelgänger of Abel. “Clark, bro, do me a favor and don’t kill me, please.” Or something witty like that. Kind of think ‘Lucifer’ should take place on Earth-666, I mean it’s different than the double Juliana Harkavy, Dan and Blood are/were main-ish characters (still is in the formers case and was in the latters, for a season anyway). There was also a theory that the events of ‘Constantine’ took place on a different Earth, wasn’t a fan of that theory but meh, thought I’d mention at least.

Does Lucifer really need to be on Earth-1? Is he needed to be there for something later on? Wouldn’t the Time Stone have helped a bunch? It does control a fundamental aspect of the multiverse. Was that the Void as in the empty black nothingness before the universe formed? Or is it multiverse? You actually could’ve added Knull since that was where he existed, before everything began and he went to war with the Celestials since he wished to return things to dark. Parker could’ve felt something in the darkness, his suit even starting to shiver, looking over his shoulder to see red eyes staring at him from the darkness. Later, when the action is over and the heroes can rest, Peter’s eyes can change, the sclera going black and the eyes turning into red spirals, before blinking them back to his normal brown. Every now and again he acts a bit more brutal than usual or speaks in a different language no one really understands (other than those with All-speak), but everyone believes it’s the suit, no one realizing it’s the Dark Elder God that created the Klyntar race, biding time for his return. No one would know the truth, not even Parker’s telepathic girlfriend since the Symbiote inside him can protect his mind.

The chanting for the spell, I would’ve changed the phrases so it’s just the Vishanti they were deriving power from. “By the Ageless Vishanti, Omnipotent Oshturr, the Eye of Agamotto and the Hoary Hosts of Hoggorth!” Another difference in power between Stephen and Strange, the latter was using the Time Stone while the former was using his Eye’s own power to boost his own time manipulation, something that the more experienced Sorcerer Supreme could educate him on. To poke fun at Hank, would there be a way to show him his future self, who just so happens to look like Scully from ‘Brooklyn Nine-Nine’, a reference to Alan Ritchson playing Scully’s younger self, could actually joke with AC as well, “enjoy your youth while you can”. Yeah I know, after the big time travel thing that just happened, using time manipulation or even a glimpse would be risky, but Strange used it before Titan and could show a mind projection to everyone of what he sees. Maybe another time anyway. Just popped into my mind, everyone can marvel over the fact that Aquaman still has both of his parents! I mean, who else can say that? It’s either one or none when it comes to heroes. Surprised Tony didn’t faint, standing frozen for a full minute though I can definitely see. Though now that he doesn’t know, maybe he’ll pass out this time when their celebrating having not died. Whether Galactus noticed the time disruption or not wouldn’t really matter to him I reckon. He’ll just go about his usual consumption of planets. Lucifer, well we never seen what he’s truly capable of but that’s what we love about him really, he can do so much but he limits himself to people’s desires and, in my mind at least, only as strong as he needs to be. His power is implied but never shown, you can make of it as you wish I guess. I’m going to be honest, I have no fecking clue what those gifts Strange gave them could be. Oh I have no doubt that Dormammu is going to be back, and he’s sick of time manipulation I can bet. Next time he might go after one of their greatest weapons, the Time Stone, or just seek a way to gain a control of time to counter the heroes. Besides, third time has to be the charm. Now that ended in the most unexpected way, never in my craziest dreams did I think it’d go down like that. Saw the video you mentioned, oh my god! Hilarious, just like you said. That prank at the start, that got me nervous but then it was his sister?! That was a good one! But then there’s these idiots stopping or abandoning their bikes? The fuck? Either run (and by run, I mean drive because a bike is faster you nimrods!) or kill the gobshites!…well don’t actually kill them but show them not to fuck with you or anyone else! Are those really what ghosts pranks are like in India? Like Carry said, they could throw a bit imagination into it. Stay safe y’all. Update soon! Take care now, bye bye then.
Arrowverse Fan 217 chapter 17 . 7/23
Amazing chapter.

Loved how they beat Dormammu.

I will wait and see on the gifts.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
Stand with Ward and Queen chapter 17 . 7/23
Great chapter.

Strange's plan was nicely done. The bits with him talking to everyone reminded me bit of part four of Crisis.

Poor everyone though.

So now it never happened huh? Interesting.

Looking forward to next chapter.

L
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 17 . 7/23
They barely beat Dormammu. And once again, it's with the help of Time that they won. Time is what it takes to defeat the Dreadlord of the Dark Dimension, but he'll be back eventually.
Cer1992 chapter 16 . 7/23
Great chapter. I agree that, while the Super-Thor vs Dormammu battle was pure awesomeness, the former simply defeating the latter would've been anti-climatic since that's what many readers would expect to happen. Looking forward to see what happens next and I wonder what repercussions Uatu was referring to.
Guest chapter 17 . 7/23
After your idea of SuperThor I recommend something, there's this deepfake video of Brandon Routh's Kingdom Come Superman's Face edited to look exactly as Christopher Reeve. Same voice different face. It's actually pretty good.
adam199118 chapter 17 . 7/23
A very unique twist with time-travel invovlved here. I will be looking forward to your take on the Anti-Monitor for your future story. Yes, this will have consequences, but if the events repeat again infuture, the heroes will be better prepared. I love seeing the Green Lantern chant in this story, Steve has proven worthy of the ring. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Stay safe brother Elessar, we salute you.
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