dude any story that applies the nen power system in remmant is an instant hook up for me. and I enjoy Raven so that's a plus really interteining I'll follow for sure.

Very nice start. But there is quite a lot going on. You may want to cut down on some of that.

there is some fic with good aura manipulation in it, the example is Cosmic Journey

Not a bad start per se, but the idea that it somehow took him so long to realise that he has for so long bothers me. I mean, sure there's the shock of the situation and adrenaline of the fight, but he would have to be an idiot not to realise the sudden change in his height, body mass and voice projection. And if nothing else people kept calling him kid, understandable that he wouldn't get it the first time, but 3rd, 5th time?

maybe he can train his aura like ki from dbz. meditate like piccolo or something.

can the pairing be ruby x si there arnt alot of good ones.