Damn it damn it! I'm freaking bawling my eyes out because Tidus died! That story was keeping on edge the entire time. Great job. Impressive. I personally hated when they don't end up together but your story did it in a way that they will always be together.

Auron died! Tidus is...MIA? XD Seymour is a distinguished dead creep and the story has finished. ): Thank you so much for writing this! This is one hell of a great story. Can't wait to read the sequel! (:

No! OH! tht ant be the end!

they're ment to be together!

Bad author! Bad Author!

Good story!

I read this story a while ago but don't think i ever reviewed. I read fanfictions A LOT! I do! Mostly Twilight but I am so obsessed with FFX (2) that I read them too. Anyway, I think this was the fanfiction that made me cry the most...out of any I've ever read! The last chapter was heart wrenching and just gazing over it again my eyes started to tear. I'm such a sap! Lol. But I wanted to let you know that you made beautiful work here and it is appreciated.

Thank you for writing.

Much love,

ashel-13

omgosh im literally crying! that was so good :)

im going to read the sequel rite now

Another great fanfic!

Such a sad ending though D':

As much as I like this story...I hated the ending! But seriously great work on the writing, I rele liked it!

oh my god thats really really sad! I'm actually crying! haha that was an amazing story well done T_T

HOW COULD YOU KILL TIDUS?

*sobs* Not fair!

Loved the story... well until you killed Ti!

Off to read sequel...

YOU RULE...

AND SUCK A LIL TOO

*sticks out tounge* but I may forgive you once i've read the sequel!

~*Kez*~

this story made me cry a little not a very Happy ending since u killed MY 2ND FAVORITE CHARACTER! i wonder..about the sequel.

constante memories see thats just what trigered the tears crap

U MEANIE!

well i did like it and i will see the sequel ASAP(as soon as posted)

I'll review, but I'm afraid that unless you want fairly harsh advice, you might not want to read all of my reviews.

The story is intriguing, and I look forward to reading more.

However, there are things that you should work on in writing in general.

1) right now, your characters feel flat, and lacking more that a few basic emotions. I would advise making them more realistic. Give them emotions that stand out a little more.

2) Work on pacing the story. The better paced it is, the more a person can enjoy the story.

3) When you type, go over and check for typos. Typos are the death of authors, as they pull the person out of the story, and it is difficult to get back in.

I liked it...it made me cry, but i liked it. I'm going to read the sequal asap. and i will review as much as i can for it. Good job.

Ilike it so far, but i am unable to read anymore. I hope to read more asap. then, i'm going to read the sequal.

wa

I CANNOT BELIEVE THAT U MADE TIDUS DIE

MEANIE!

so god

kisses