I luv the story! To bad he never finished! It is a great surmise!

Nice start! Shows Dudley changed after the Dementors!

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. Please have Tonks and Hermione force Harry to take Polyjuice Potion and become a girl with them. Thank you in advance.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

While I personally would prefer a synopsis of how you planned out this story, I understand the desire to let it rest. I don't want to read a story force-written; I've read those before, and frankly they are not worth the time.

Best of luck in your future endeavors!

DRAGGED not DRUG. A DRUG is a medicinal or sometimes recreational substance that has an effect on the human body or mind.

Common mistake that really jars and irritates when reading something so well written:

DRUG is a chemical substance used in medicine or for illegal recreation. Used as a verb,the past tense is drugged.
DRAGGED is the past tense of drag

Drug is a narcotic. The past tense of 'drag' is 'dragged'. Your work is full of tautologies such as
"Opening the window as to allow his snowy owl access upon her return" -The word 'as' is superfluous.

Is this an abandoned or do you plan on continuing your story? It's really interesting so far and I want to see how Dudley avenges everyone and how the wizarding world copes with Harry's Death.

Harry smoking is incredibly retarded.

Please Please Please!

Dragged not DRUG! Drug is something sold by a pharmacist or a pusher and is frequently hallucinogenic!

Then vs Than

Meals are prepared . never 'fixed'! Only things that are broken or fluid can be fixed...

Hmm... hhr... or... harry/tonks...

EFFFIN BOTH

Just reread this for the first time in years probably and wanted to let you know that its quality - unlike so many other fics that I favorited years ago - stands the test of time. I think you were on the path to something truly great here. I see in your profile that you're completely through with SoT and won't update it again, and though that saddens me, as a fellow author I can understand. Do know, though, that if you ever find the inspiration to continue writing, whether its SoT or another fic or an original work completely divorced from the Harry Potter universe, you've got a loyal reader in me.

Cheers!

LS

i am starting to really like this. the thing with cricket was good i will give you that, i thought it was tonks to. i also like the suggestivness. it there but its not ott and the tonks kissing harry in the car was funny my lass looked at me wiered when i burst out in laughter.

is this a tonks/harry thing i hope so cause it would be the first one i have read that was any decent. the whole dudley bit i liked. the bit with the flash back. i would of perfered harry to have least put up a little fight. i cant imagine him being that much of a pussy whiped bitch. but that the only bad thing keep it up look forward to next one.