Hmmm your story was okay. There were some parts i didnt like, like how everyone was just bothering naruto constantly or how hinata just kept following naruto and not doing anything about it, she helped in the end but he had to go through everyone just for her to finally do something. Also the epilogue, you should have just stuck with the second one instead of making two.
Perhaps this story wasnt for me but keep doing you and keep writing, especially if you enjoy it!

Hello author! I just read your first chapter but i just wanted to tell you to keep writing no matter what. I mean sometimes i read the reviews and people just talk shit even tho they have the option to leave. Don't get me wrong when i read a bad story i write a review letting them know what i didnt like and that there story wasn't for me, but some people are just plain mean. I hope you dont take there shit to heart because you are your own person and people who talk shit towards you instead of explaing why they didnt like the story are people who have no lives and just want something to get mad about.
Anyways im still reading, i dont know yet if im going to like it or not because its just the first chapter but ill let you know:)

This is why Hinata is best girl

Have Sasuke have a crush on Hinata. lol Have Hinata asked Sasuke bring Naruto back for her.

Go naruto!

Iratus odio vulpes fangirls...

And neither does Hinata. Those girls who /just/ noticed Naruto because he was brooding had better find themselves lucky the Hyuuga heir didn't notice them... or there would have been hell to pay! [As soon as she got her arms from around Naru-chan]

I am literally crying from how beautiful this is.

'Eyesore in orange' my smallest left toe! He doesn't need anything a bit 'less bright' when he can already dodge ANBU with his skills! You tell him Naru-Chan!

Fcc you Sasuke and Sakura. Swear, when you made this, I was only like 6 months old, lmao. Sup oldie c;

Your mother was a whore. You caught the crusty bitch spreading her cunt for the same prick who creampied your girlfriend. Thats why you wrote this angsty bullshit. Because you know that you're too much of a pansy to do jackshit, you fucking cuck. Hahahaha

Crybaby naruto

Great job I liked it

“Hinata knew most of Naruto’s favourite places to go”

Thai just reinforces the fact that she’s a creepy stalker, closet-pervert, useless weirdo.

i still dont know who that group of giggling girls in the last chapter were... i want it addressed that naruto has fans

Nooooooooooooo and yet...Yay?