Man! That story was dirty. Made my face all red and...made me get a boner(Sorry I said that. ;)

Anywho, Great story btw! _

That was really hot. Keep up the good work.

OMG its so good you shulld keep doing this fic its prety much great...well anyway i dont think that you will read my mesaje so i dont care

read all eight chaps in a row. very ... shocked?no thats not it... suprised ya that works.

all in all a surpirisingly great fic.

although to tell the truth 8 chaps of smut usually are pretty good.

definately added to faves and would say keep it up. im interested on how koarin will find out (if at all) though i think kagura would notice the missing part the next time she was there.

any way 10/10 great job. keep at it, please

p.s. if you are looking for a new spin on it you could start doing chapters from different points of view.

Okay, I have what I like to call an automatic imagination. As soon as I read or hear something, it immediately forms an image in my head, and there's no way to stop it. As a result, while reading this, I got...ehh...naughty thoughts...

SakakixKagura isn't exactly my favorite pairing, but Jesus Christ! The critic in me says that it was a bit rediculous and even funny at times, but the pervert in me absolutely loved it! The latter kinda takes the upper hand here. Nice piece of erotic literature, pornographic actually, but I sure don't mind. I don't even care if it was OOC. And I guess this rates as an MA, but FFN stopped caring it seems.

Oh, and the ending was funny. It wouldn't be bad to end it like this, but to be honest, I'd like a little more XD.

Now if you excuse me, my fanboy imagination is going nuts! *Oh God, bad thoughts, get outta my head!*

I'm sorry that I'm too lazy to actually sign in!

Anyways, I think you should continue this story. It definately has an enormous amount of potential.

The characters are slightly OOC- but for the situation that they're in, I think you did a fantastic job.

Keep writing!

.X

Kagura being Sakaki's kitty she want to be her bitch,but good stroy

HOOLLYCRRAAPO!

The long wait was so worth it.

I swear, you are the god of lemons. I would be way to embarrased to type the stuff you type.

Oh, and DO NOT END IT THERE! The story's too good! Turn it into a threesome!

you should turn it into a 3 way

but very good story,but how did it take 3 years to make?

my god it's, wow its been a while huh?

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*drops the Jaw and Nose starts to bleed*

Now this is where I say..."What the f%ck? This is just weird..."

Seriously, I was really enjoing it until all the REALLY kinky stuff, like the meowing and stuff. It's getting...Boring...Because it's just...Well...TOTALLY OOC. Not that that matters much, it's just...Yeah, I'm gone. You need to write better stories. Less erotic, more..um...emotional. Yeah. Laterz.

~The one, the only KAORIN

If you were to bump the rating, you couldn't have it on FFN...

Right? And that would be so sad...

You know, this has never been one of my favorite pairings, but hot dang! It turns ome on XD

holy crap, new chapters! great stuff. i love how shy they both are about everything _ too cute

Good to see your still alive...