Haha, wow, that was great! Much, much better than all the rest of the fanfics I've read tonight. Great job, it was well-written, although a bit confusing in one spot, and you incorporated the details quite well.

~Wings~

it was good, even though some parts were a bit confusing. i liked it. you should continue it.

Hi!

Taiyoukai_ai here! Just wanted to let you know that I liked your story. You're right, I do think that it shoud be a little longer, but hey you have a great start. Also, maybe you should be a little more specific about what is taking place here. I had to go bck a few times just to be sure.

This is great! Love the plot so far. Keep going! I have a story in this book, but it is not as good as yours. (As I do say so myself)...

I liked it a stuff, keep writting oh and if ypu can check out some storiesby my friend SlytherinGoddessRoseThorns. Can't wait to read more, update soon _

another good chapter, but i feel kinda like i've missed something, which is entirely possible. sorry it took me so long to review for this. i've just been incredibly busy with things lately (just had finals at school...blech). a nickname for Kyra...hm..i like your idea of Twilight, and yes it is a bit long, but her name itself is only four letters. i don't think it's going to get much shorter, personally.

if you need help fixing your errors, i'm up for beta currently. just an idea. anyway...keep writing!

great! yes-the chapters are short, but this is really well written! i love it-please update. u don't need to reply to this review-i hope that in stumble apon this ff again-i really should get an account.

so-yeah-really good. very dramatic. prolouge was intense. just loved it! really can't wait to read what happens next.

love,

bella

Okay, you reviewed me a REALLY long time ago on my Green Angel fic, lol, and I was bored and skimming through some stuff and there you were, a review. So i decided to come see your little part of this huge site. My best friend LOVES this book, so I decided to give it a look. Great job. Anyway, keep it up. We generally write totally different things though so...whatever. Anyway, my point is thanks for your wonderful review, and you rock too. lol.

ANNA

as for a name for the Smoke witch (i agree that you need one, as you can't keep called her the young Smoke witch, lol), i rather like the name Taiya. there were a few mistakes in this chapter as well, but i don't blame you, if you were up at 3 am writing this lol.

another good chapter. ) so i'm guessing that Kyra is the werewolf, right? she seems pretty cool. i really like this, because you've done so well with the images and things, and plus, i love vampires and werewolves. on i have a story called My Life as a Teenage Werewolf, which you might like, if you like werewolves. anywho, i would also like to point out the few mistakes you made, like with women and woman. you wrote women a lot, but it's supposed to be woman unless it's plural. sorry, just had to point that out, but other than that, fantastic job!

wow! this was quite short, but so good. i loved the imagery you used, and also i loved your word choice. good job!

~Gemzgurl (aka mya)

p.s. since you liked my story so much, i decided to check you out, and i'm glad i did! welcome to my favourite stories/authors lists. )

awsome. It keeps getting better and better. as for your wanting suggestions for a name, I got a lot of mine from Final Fantasy VII. Awsome game. Getting off topic there. anyways, I can't wait till you update. Thanks for sending me that Ameila site. I'm gonna go read those chapters now. Peace and chicken grease.

Go for it. I think a werwolf crossover would be far out. (Please excuse my 60's speech patterns) anyways, I really like Kyra. She seems pretty cool. Please continue this.

I really like this story. It's very good, indeed. I can't wait to find out who this girl is and what's going on. You left it at a cliffhanger. Anyways, I'll go read the rest now. Peace.

this is interesting, and very well written...but the chapters need to be longer...other than that, the story is great!