Huh...shocked u got everyone mentioned..nice job..also mermaids pairings ftw.

huh! i finished reading until the latest chapter! i'm so glad and delighted to find things turning out this way! The ending where the hero is left on the boat really made me speechless~ :o i'm really confused as to why he was there but reading this fiction sort of answered my questions! o i'm so very reallly happy! :D i hope you updated soon~

I am glad you continue this story.

Updated! Yaay!

This story is nice. I love it so much, especially Chapter 6, (when Kika hugs Lazlo(Link) and she blushed) Tee hee hee...

Update pleaasee

hm...this story is good and preety funny...oh!hey name axel nice to review you!anyway your story good and all..but i was wondering what the pairing in this fic?i mean who's the lucky girl that be link girlfrien or fiance or something...if its link(lazlo)Xpaula im going to thank you 10 time!even thought you cant hear me...if you wondering why i ask that well...im lazloXpaula fans!i dont know why but i like that pairing!i always like elf girl!anyway its your story you decide but if its yaoi then...im going to haunt you for all eternity!XD no ofense if you like yaoi but i dont!eh...dont be mad please im sometime a litle overboard...anyway please dont be mad...okay!good luck and keep up the good work!update soon!(if there any wrong spealing please forgive me)

Nya Nya Nya! Great job on this chapter! Are Colton and Helmut really family? Oh and if you can, can you try to bring back Eugene? Or if you already have and I missed it could you tell me what chapter it is?

Keep this 's rare for me to find people who wrote Suikoden IV when the hero return to , it's good buddy.

Hey, nice. If someone hadn't written something like this detailing Lazlo's return soon, I would have done it myself. Good story. Keep it up!

Im so happy I could cry...thiss the first time I see Kika in a fic at this site(let alone acting like a real captain)

Now seriously,Im liking the story,keep on going.

keep writting! the chapters are very short,and you make things just to fast. try to delay events a little bit more. besides that,the story is pretty good.

Very nice very nice indeed. I like it i love it! Keep going!

hey nice story. will the hero even have a girl? I hope it's Kika then! anyway update soon

So Flare isn't an only child, eh? I didn't know that. (Of course, the farthest I've gotten is where Snowe joins -assuming you have all the other characters- so that's hardly a surprise.) Good chapter.

It would have been nice to expand a little on this chapter. The ideas are very good, but the chapter as a whole seems a little choppy. Also watch how many "more than"s you use in a row. I counted two in quick succession! I would have liked to see a little more interaction with each of the people you've brought in to welcome him back. I'm looking forward to the "reunion".

Yes! A Suikoden IV fic! I've been waiting forever for one. Please continue