tsuruko and kanako would be my recomendation, mutsubi is not bad and naru only if she matures out of her traumas, motoko is easey to develop in particular with the begginin you gave it already

Aw dang. Another nice story left floating in the mists.

Great story!

Looks interesting. :)

I hope you eventually get back to this.

I catched your stories in a forum, you must know which. And yes, I said "stories". Casually, all of summaries that catched my attention in the Love Hina section are from YOUR WORKS.

Your stories, for me, are plain intersting. And the way you drive the scenes, making them funny and no a "very long lenght piece of unnecesary descriptions" (well, maybe a little more details, but the story is just too intersting to make a real point of this). Let's just say you know perfectly when and how to start them and how to end them: it's a simple thing, but I think you take it very well.

I hope this crap of review (my english isn't the best: not my first language) helped you in some way.

UPDATE! UPDATE!

somehow i dont think that ranma would be so calm after his mother dilibratly used age mushrooms on him. I think he would be rather upset at someone taking his choices in life away from him again, especially after he killed saffron and destroyed the springs. other than that, good story.

Overall im not really pleased with your portrayal of Nodoka... I like the fact that your taking your story in a new way. But i really don't think they would stoop to such underhanded measures as forcibly reducating Ranma. Because of this, i feel that Ranma would probably feel betrayed by his mother and wouldn't accept what is happening to him. However this isn't to say that i hate your work, you have a solid idea for a story, and your characters are very sound. Also i like the fact that your having his mother take a greater roll in his life. keep up the story, can't wait to see how you decide to proceed.

Heh! promising story...

*blinkblink*

Aw, and just as I was getting into it. *pout*

Excuse me, may I have more please? *puppydog eyes*

Enjoyable writing. The speach is stiff and formal, but it fits with the characters. I'm interested to see how Ranma's ki training progresses with him having to go through puberty again, only this time as a ki adept.

Tsk! Nodoka's such a nut :p

Interesting title. I can't really see how it relates to the plot... is it by any chance a reference to The Critic?

I still remember that episode _ "Wait a minute, eggs don't ripen. EGGS DON'T RIPEN!"

O! I like this story. You should let Ranma and Kasumi hook up, they make such a cute couple. And maybe she'll be able to learn martial arts again. I didn't even realize the Love Hina cross over until the very end. That's what I get for not paying better attention. You have the makings for a wonderful story here. So much potential with the younger Ranma that I am certainly looking forward to future chapters coming about.

Can't wait for the spar. I wonder how Ranma will do since he is used to having a different reach than his four year old body will have. My thinking is that in the beginning of the fight he won't be doing as well, since he'll be having to readjust to the way his body works, but as the fight progresses, he will continue to learn at his normal amazing pace.

Really good story. I definitely will wait for more _

Thank You and good luck!

:D Has laterer come? Cuz it's welcome to appear at any time now. :P

Luv ya, Lord Raa.

Laterz!

i like, i like.

a very interesting look at one possibilty that would probably be at nodoka's desposal.

wonder how the match against ranma will go, will he have to resort to using chi attacks due to his small stature and decreased reach?