Haha what a cute story! :D I love the idea of Guardians helping young heroes with their powers. Also is Clockwork a time lord like the Doctor? You did say "time lords" plural so... That's an awesome idea! There should totally be a crossover where Clockwork and the Doctor meet. Anyway great story and thanks for writing! :)

So many spelling errors. Sorry, I'm something of a linguistics nut, and all the spelling mistakes kind of hit me in the face. Miss Daily is a bit too perfect and Mary Poppins-ish. I won't say Mary Sue because she did mess up a few times (e.g. not keeping Danny out of her Dangerous Items Room).

Other than that, nice story! Worth the time spent reading.

Hello. I've been a fan of this story for a long time and I'm reading it over again to remember details for the sequal you wrote.

I noted this statement from Sarah Daily: "Time travel is complicated, disorientating, and always gives me nosebleeds." it made me think of Doctor Who. Since we do have a time lord in the form of Clockwork, and he does show up in your short story "The Omega Child", I was thinking of this as avague reference about Doctor Who. Makes me think The Doctor (which version, your pick) is going to pop up one day news of with another alien invasion. Again. Only we get ghosts involved.

I really like your OC (and I tend not to like them because of poor execution) and how it stacks with the canon reality. I also liked your Harry Potter crossover too. I hope to continue reading more from you about this DP universe, crossovers and all (even if they are AU to this universe).

Hehe, she sounds like Ms. Mikenzi (or however it is spelled) from Cardcaptors-aka the mysterious math teacher who knows everything. And the person that has a crush on the mc dosen't like them. cool story!

To things: Commas and end quotes. You need to know where and when to use commas, and you need to remember to end dialogue with the end quotes. It would make a HUGE difference, trust me. Just those two things would make your writing look a million bucks better.

Great fic! Please can there be a sequel!

I get it now. What Danny doesn't want to remember is Freakshow's mind control isn't it.

Wow.

Very good

whoo! im ready for the sequel!

:( it's all done

BUT

it was an awesome two chappies!

AWESOME ENDING! :D

Great start, awesome middle, and an end that wraps things up nicely and leaves you with a sense of closure. All around, an excellent tale.

Another well done chapter. The last line makes me think though. Danny and Co. really are like a team. But unlike, say, the Teen Titans, they haven't called themselves anything. I really enjoyed reading the whole thing. Congratulations on a wonderful job!

AWESOME CHAPTER! UPDATE SOON! :D