I really like the hedgehog analogy :)

There are a few grammar mistakes and typos that you might want to look out for e.g.

"Sometimes he came into Remus (Remus') bed like a rueful dog"

"Remus took a job at a Muggle place, he didn’t earn much, nut (but) at least it was a regular income."

Yeah I know -my review comes kinda late...eh? But hell, I don't care...maybe you'll read it.

I must tell you, that you made me laugh. Really. Not 'cause your story is laughable (it's wonderful, sad and just breathtaking!Actually you inspired me to write myself) but because I'm just stupid.

Before I went and wrote you the review I read your profile...and had a good laugh.

Why?

Weil ich deine geschichte auch auf deutsch hätte lesen können ;)

Man...karma ist echt eigenartig!

2 deutesche nudeln, die bede SBxRL slash lieben und die eine nudel ist seltsam genug die Geschichte noch auf englisch zu lesen -.-;

But hey! I like the english version more...don't stop writng, okay? It would be a shame

(swiss wie in ""?)

Dialogue should be in quotation marks, and there shouldn't be commas after the dialogue if there is already punctuation in the dialogue. You know? Aside from that, it's fine. A good story.

This is sad. The ending was sad. This was entirly too sad!

But I do like your writing style. And I like how you could relate everything to Remus.

This was all so fantastic. The way you described their relationship, Remus's way of shutting himself away, and the breakdown/confession scene was brilliant. I loved it all, and the ending was just fantastically bittersweet.

Favorited.

This story is very morose, but wonderfully written.

The continuing theme is very well expressed and quite brilliant.

I adore the last line; it's perfect.

Swiss? What on earth is swiss?

I really liked this. It was very believable, and the emotions were very realistic. My only complaint is that you never showed the whole part where they thought Remus was the spy. That would've been a very interesting addition to this story.

In any case this was very well written. Good work!

Ah, this was just wonderful... Save for the occasional typo (feel free to let me know if you want a beta reader, btw) it was EXPERTLY written! Angsty without being melodramatic - very nice indeed. And I must say you create very believable characters :) I'm SO putting this in my favs.

Keep up the good work!

Beautiful. I loved it.

swiss? hmm, i don't think it was swiss. it was good though, very good, I think you could continue this even if you just decribe remus' emotions when he finds out sirius has escaped azkaban, and what he feels when they come face to face in the shack... please?

skinnyrita

this is one of my favorite sirius/remus' in a long time

i loved it