As always, excellent machinations from one of my favorite authors.

Oh, well. Tom is Tom. Always dark. But I love this story!

I can already tell this is about to become epic. Love it already.

I really enjoyed this story. I actually just read all of it in around 2 hours non-stop. There were a few typos, but I have to say I absolutely LOVED this story. You are an amazing writer! Just wanted to say thank you for posting this story. It has to be one of my favorite fanfictions now.

Tu historia me parecía interesante y me gustó mucho al principio pero en la mitad hiciste que hermione se convirtiera en alguien bastante estúpida y manipulable lo deteste

This had me LOL like a made woman. :D I ADORE that the Dark side won, and Hermione found happiness with her evil asshole of a husband. Brilliant!

Loved this but we never got to understand what happen when Tom "cheated". I'd have loved Tom pov for that. Maybe he didn't finish and erased her memory and went back to hermione. Or maybe we could understand why he did that. And than at the end there he mentioned fuckdolls as his one night stands. Did he me before hermione. Only these five years that she was gone or the whole time goes been cheating.

So...why can she still hear the voice? Why can she hear the voice at all? Why add the voice at all? I mean, at first it was annoying, now its downright irritatingly so. I mean, I want to like the story, I really do, as the premise sounds amazing, but...I can't. Not with that voice in it. So, with that being said, good bye and farewell.

I am reading this in a bus
just can't stop laughing

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most funny fan fic ever if u know what i mean

Loving this very very much

Dont really know where this plot is going and i don't feel like their relationship was developed enough. I also don't think the characterization if Hermione is correct especially given her choice of pet. The story just feel random and thrown together.

what?

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