Reviews for My Happy Ending
gay.ham chapter 4 . 8/26/2017
please update
Guest chapter 4 . 6/28/2017
PLEASE UPDATTEEE!
deathshadow1031 chapter 4 . 6/4/2015
more chaps. plz
YaoiHimeSama chapter 4 . 2/19/2015
Seriously!? I hate cliffhangers! Will you be updating son? :(
Guest chapter 4 . 3/2/2013
it's so very good :) But why a cliffhanger? I would love to see more! :)
LuckyTurtle chapter 4 . 1/9/2013
Nooo! Cliffhanger! Please, what happens next?!
Pecha Pichu chapter 2 . 8/25/2012
lol take that Sakura!

"Sakura frowned, turning her body slightly so that she could keep the other two in her sights. "That Machiko is what's wrong. She's hanging all over Naruto!"

The brunette tilted his head. "Is that bad?"

"Yes!" Sakura hissed, scowling.

"I understand that you acted that way with Sasuke-san when you were younger, and Yamanaka-san does that every time she sees me…" Sai said slowly. "So does that mean that your behavior was bad, and that Yamanaka-san's behavior is still bad?"

The pink-haired girl blinked. "What? No! That's… That is a completely different situation!""

heh, I don't dislike Sakura, but that totally summarises her previous behaviour

"The brunette stepped up to the challenge admirably. "Mizuhara-san, please, could you tell us how you managed to keep your clothes on in an X-rated film?"

Machiko swung her glare around to Sai, but it faltered once she noticed that he was merely asking out of curiosity and not sarcasm."

Sai was so cute at that scene!
Mana-sensei chapter 4 . 8/23/2012
ahhh cliffy xd

update soon!
Celestialfae chapter 4 . 3/11/2012
I have an idea just what they are going to talk about:

Either its whether Naruto knows about Sasuke or its about Machiko.

So are the two girls going to have a row. Know what would be funny if Jiraya wrote a sequel and showed "Icha Icha Paradise: Girls Gone Wild" starring Machiko and Sakura.

That would be a story worth telling. Speaking of which do they have an icha icha paradise out in book shelves. I kind of am curious as to what the deal is about.
sugardash chapter 4 . 7/11/2011
Why havent you updated this is good.
darkangel325 chapter 4 . 4/28/2011
o.o ohh suspense!
Emo Dragon 7 chapter 4 . 4/5/2011
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE GOD DAMNIT UPDATE! I DONT EVEN CARE IF IT WAS LAST UPDATED IN 07 I REALLY GOTTA SEE WAT HAPPENS NEXT. MY GOD! Interesting story but definately needs more sex
stranger danger chapter 4 . 2/1/2011
you ganna update? im getting tired of waiting (or is that my lack of sleep) please include sakura bashing. your so good at that and at least ten bucket fulls of sasunaru!
genderless-but straight chapter 4 . 7/2/2010
More please
Forever Breathing Stars chapter 4 . 3/27/2010
Ack! The talk is about Sasuke isn't it? I'm the same as you when it comes to stories, writing a lot and finishing little.
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