It has sort of a haunting beauty about it... I really love this xxx

I like your writing style but I really don't get this story at all.

NOW I get it. I think.

It's sweet, with a sad undertone (not really sure why, it's just...there) and it's beautiful.

I can't think of a better way for James to propose to Lily.

I love your style of writing, it's very distinct. And I hope that didn't sound too creepy.

Luna

Again, not really understanding, but it's sweet. Not quite fluff, but love nonetheless.

Luna

I didn't understand this one...but maybe I'm not reading into it...Maybe the second part will make understanding easier.

It's a nice peek into Lily's mind, though.

Luna

you are a beautiful writer, i love all of you work. please keep writing

this really is one of the most beautiful representations of love i have ever even seen. I AM appalled such writing talent is spending time on Fanfiction.

Very beautiful fic!

Hello!

This fic was very beautiful, very ethereal, different from others, I like it.

Mary.

3... 2... 1... All together now!

"Aw!"

Good work. :) A really nice little story. :)

Love Bundi

I love this story!

That was fantastic. You are an amazing writer. I loved this story. Simply amazing. I loved the line:

"He looks at her and she knows they have their whole lives ahead of them and they're going to waste it on each other."

That line so explains what love is! At least, in one aspect. I loved it.

Ep! Amazing! Perfect end! I still wish I knew what was troubling them but I can forget that because of this glorious chapter. That and the fact that you're a very mysterious story teller. You like the reader to fill in the details from their imagination and that's what makes you so good.

Anyway, looking forward to more of your work!

wow. You've done it again. transformed words into a masterpiece and with this i bow to you.

Very deep perspective, the line, "He looks at her and she knows they have their whole lives ahead of them and they’re going to waste it on each other" gave me chills. Wonderful story. Again very deep and meaningful! ]