I liked the story a lot, I just feel bad for my boy Riku :(
But at least you didn't completely throw him under the bus lol. I'm happy he was involved at the ending, and I know no one will see this comment since it's 2020. Just thought I'd share my thoughts cuz I love KH and I appreciated this story.

One thing if Roxas is sora's nobody then wouldn't he be a protecter? Same with Namine

omg i love it. so sweet. definately my favourite roxas and olette story so far.

The only complaint I could make about this is all the random arguments Roxas and Olette got into. Roxas and Olette both, in the game at least, seemed way too level headed to get into screaming arguments, especially the one right after the second time they kissed.

Don't take that to mean that I didn't like the story, quite the opposite really. I loved it, it was very well written, just a little out of characterness for your two protagonists. And that's just the die-hard part of me that tends to stay strictly canon with personalities.

This story is still a gem in an ocean of duds though, good work :)

That was... that was... too awesome to thank you for in words. I need to give you a hug. Thank you for the wonderful addition of this RoxasxOlette in the seas of stories of RoxasxNamine. I can only cross my fingers and hope you'll write more. Amazing work~

that was...(sob) Beautifull!

lol

this is kind of the certain point of her life that people commit suiside during a love game

Aww this was such a cute story 3 This is the first time I read a Roxette story, or a story with Olette as a main character for that matter, but it was really awesome. This story wasn't very devastating or drama-riffic but that's really a good thing! It was a little weird reading the end of the story (without the epilogue) since I've never read a romancey story where they characters don't end up together, but then they did in the epilogue and it was great! ... Is this review even making sense anymore? Uhh anyway, I love your writing, and this was another great story!

Last names are kinda wierd O.O

You know, I looked at the title of this story so many times, but refused to click on it because it was an AU fic. But now I see how idiotic I was. I don't know how, but you have gotten all the angst of going away to a university down. Certainly there are joys and surprises, but there's always the longing of keeping what we have and not wanting friendships, families, and relationships to change. You got it all down perfectly. And the drama! I couldn't get enough of it, surprisingly. It seemed like every argument actually have a valid reason behind it...and it didn't drag on foolishly. I really liked this.

XD Pence and Selphie! Her reactions to everything were so funny. But poor wittle Riku, or should I say big Riku? So sad he's all sad :( But I prefer him not with Selphie At least there's the Roxette wedding lol!

Ended so soon, but totally crazy cool thru it all. I guess I'll read on more of your storiesCute ending!

FF009

Aww, it's finished :[

At least it was an awesome ending I'm really glad you made them engaged, it gives the story a nice sense of...completeness :]

I also loved how it was sort of through Selphie's eyes...bwahaha, Selphie and Pence - love it! XD

I'm glad Riku gets to be a part of it all too

Well, congrats for another awesome story! :D

That's a crack pair, alright, but with this fic, I don't think it's too weird. I do kinda feel sorry for Riku, though. He's had it pretty-to-kinda bad in both fics I've read of yours. Maybe you should make him the good guy in the next one?

Haha, just a suggestion. I like Riku, even if he does suite the bad guy more than good.

Wasn't a bad epilogue though I'm sad to see it end. Oh well, maybe I'll read anouther fic of yours! Yay!

Bex O

AH xD

the ending was so cute XD

I was so depressed today, for not making the soccer team

But this story has got me smiling again :D

Awesome job, and cute ending!

~Sky

omg i cant believe its over it was a great story