Quite sweet and to the point.

This gives some really good insights into Rukia's thoughts. I think you are right that this is how she feels.

Oh, very nice. A sequel would be awesome. You could actully write a full story based on this.

OMGSH this is really good. You should write a sequal about how Hisana felt throught the years after she left Rukia and how she met Byakuya (well how you think they met).I have a friend and we RPG and in our RPG we brought Hisana back because of Aizen so she could kill Byakuya but now they'er happy. And in our RPGness they have 3 i repeat 3 kids. But thats just us. It would be a god idea to write a sequal about what i said earlyer. I hope you like my advice

Sweet!

I hope you'll make the sequel in which Rukia discovers things about Hisana .

Very interesting. I liked it.