Reviews for Oasis
nwlynn chapter 1 . 1/9
"Metal augmented by the immeasurable determination of our captain." That's great, and about covers who KJ is.
The whole conversation between KJ and C is wonderful to read. I'm glad she broke down and really apologized for telling him to recycle the watch. It seems like a serious apology now and then between these two, especially from her to him, could really maintain their relationship longer than they could manage to stay friends otherwise. I also like the idea that they would be comfortable sleeping in each others' arms, whether they're actually in a romantic relationship or not. They have so many kinds of love between them, it almost (but not quite) doesn't matter whether they're a romantic couple or not. I think that's what makes many of your stories so fascinating.
SweetlyMagnifique chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
Really sweet!
Lynn chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
I hope they did have times like this
skadoo chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Liked this Turbolift story filtered through B'Elanna's eyes (or ears)
Kerry J chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
That was beautiful. And romantic. I always hated the fact that she didn't accept the watch and am very glad to see her regret that in your version. I loved the humour in it, too. And the fact that B'Elanna narrates this, adds another layer to the story.
hester4418 chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Sweet and sad at the same time. That's really well done!
Cerulean.Phoenix7 chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
What a sweet J/C moment, and I love that we find out about through an outside observer. Also, the use of the inoperable turbolift as an 'oasis' is very clever.

The characters are great, and normally I'm not one for first-person in fanfic but it worked.

Nice job,

CP7
Visage chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
What a sweet little moment between the two of them. I loved the descriptions of emotions. Fantastic. Thank you for sharing this with us!
TrekGames23 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
That was such a great J&C moment and it was really cute how B'Elanna reacted to it -
polomare chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
Ah, "Outside The Box" fanfic. Love it! B'elanna's point of view is very interesting for something different. A from me.

All of your stories are great, actually.
Rachel Selina chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
Not sure if I've reviewed this story yet or not but I loved it either way, and would love more of it:)
Ayjah chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
I love the way you had the situation interpreted by someone else. Very refreshing :)
quantumsilver chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
Yay! Another Mizvoy story! Sorry this is a few days late, I've been trying to keep up with everyone... This was utterly heartwarming. Insightful. It's almost light, in spite of the dark setting of the Krenim attacks, and it's stellar. B'Elanna's point of view, especially with regard to Chakotay and what his actions really mean, are wonderful. JC is beautifully done, without being overstated and heavy on gritty detail... *Sigh*. Miz, is there ANYTHING I can say about your work that you haven't already heard before - a hundred times? Somehow, I doubt it. It's always worth the read, no matter what. The characters are always accurate, the story/premise clearly well thought out, and your execution is nearly always flawless... would you just write a bad one, for once? Just once? So the rest of us can feel human by comparison? No? Didn't think so...

More, please? ;)
allie34 chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Great story! As always, I look forward to your next fanfiction submission.
addrianna818 chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Aw so sweet! I love the idea of a little "Oasis" on the ship...Awsome story!
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