lol I love the Pinky and the Brain reference you put in at the end.

This was really well written. Thank you for taking the time to write it in “Pirate Speak”, as I call it. lol I think this would work really well as a multi chapter, Cutler Sparrow centric (Romance...Drama?) fic.

I mean I could totally see Jack turning out to be Spanish royalty. I love POTC fics where Jack is secretly some kind of noble or royalty.

- Anyway, great job.

This is really good. I was a little confused, but I read it twice, and understood. . . a bit. I LOVED the disclaimer song though. Keep up the good work.

I simply adored this! It was fast-paced, witty, original, and with a lovely dash of humour all at the same time... bravo. A very good delve into Beckett and Jack's (amusing) past, as well as character exploration.

Your grammar, spelling and prose are perfect-and though usually I hit 'back' at the sight of long paragraphs that look to hurt my eyes (I'm a little selective that way, heh), I hardly noticed yours, as engulfed in the story as I was. I didn't understand the first two sentences... I'm not sure if it's a typo or me being dumb. But I did love the last sentence. ;)

All in all-beautiful!

squeeks x

LOL, yea Gods Cutler Beckett in a thigh-high stockings is an image that will linger. Well done!