This would be a grat story if not for your punctuation, syntax and spelling. I see on your profile that you are a beta, having read your beta profile it seems that you need a beta just for that. Please work on the things I mentioned, it is painful to read as it stands and this is coming from a person that got bad grades in English while in school. If you make those improvements I assure you that you would have a winner on your hands.

make narusakuino better

Luv it but needs more chapts. Do the survival excersice but naruto and sakura fuck.

I really like it! but can you update sooner pls! XD :D

awsome story

This is a good story. Please continue. Naruto and Sakura forever.

please update your story as soon as you can

please write a new chapter for this story

man always the same crap, sasuke a jackass then naruto beat him... then the girls like naruto bla bla bla lol...

this i good and different. im enjoying this so plz up load quickly.

this is so going on my alert and faves.

keep up the great work.

nice chapter and update soon

-Haruno Sakura. I have no hobbies, I don’t like anything and I really don’t have any dislikes. And my dreams no my goal is to kill a certain someone.”

Something to update :P

Is your name supposed to be spelled wrong or was that an OOPS? Is it secret or secrete?

This is one of those stories that is SO bad it becomes funny - like a really low budget/schlock horror movie. The grammer and punctuation are pathetic, characters are simplistic and your understanding of speech/dialog leaves much to be desired.

I fell out laughing when I read you bit on team introductions.

"“Name, hobbies, likes, dislike and dreams.”

“Haruno Sakura. I have no hobbies, I don’t like anything and I really don’t have any dislikes. And my dreams no my goal is to kill a certain someone.”

“Up next pinky.”

“Haruno Sakura. My hobbies are gardening, and I like my boyfriend.” Sakura looks and Naruto and smiles."

Your first Sakura sounds a lot like Sasuke. Your second Sakura sounds like an idiot.

HOBBIES (the PLURAL of hobby) means MORE THAN ONE HOBBY so Sakura's HOBBY is gardening.

And how does Sakura look AND naruto and smiles?

"“O.k. then tomorrow meat my at the training grounds at 5 am and do not eat anything.”"

OMG MEAT MY! How about MEET ME?

You might want to pay attention in school from now on; this looks like it was done by someone working on their third shot at the fourth grade.

this is a fun story, needs a little more sasuke bashing, but its still early. update soon and keep up the good work