Oh, god, I laughed SO HARD when I read this! I'm about to read chapter 4 and I'm hoping it's as funny as the first ones! Keep writing, dude! (Or dudette...)

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! This story is amazing and hilarious and I REALLY wanna see more!

Legendary. :)

I can tell you've worked hard on this chapter - the length, for one.

The humour continued wonderfully - some lines were just priceless.

Glad to see the update RK! :)

OMG! You actually continued this hilarious story!

This is among my top 3 favorite Paper Mario parodies, this and Paper Mario X are tied for first. The other one was ended in the middle of Chapter 5: Hot Times on Lava Lava Island.

But this one has a lot of sexual humor, the kind of humor I like!

You seriously gotta continue this!

The best part was Luigi and Parakarry's encounter. LOL Luigi shoved Parakarry's face in the microwave and Parakarry could only think about eating popcorn instead of his face!

Love the way you portrayed Mario! His whole team hates him, he acts like douche, and he acts like a moron!

Your take on the characters is just hysterical and I just loved Kooper's line "MARIO...WE FUCKING HATE YOU!" or that when Bombette said "Fuck you Kooper!" and Kooper replied "I would love it if we could do that!"

This is just mad funny!

This truly is an excellent piece of work - such a delight to read.

Usually, I don't like things that are more than 40 words a chapter - but I make a special exception for you; because with you, there isn't too much of a good thing. :)

At the start, all of those perverted jokes - simply hilarious! I'm the sort to laugh at that sick and twisted humour, so you pleased me! :)

"Kooper has a Star Piece impaled in his head!" - greatest line ever!

All the characters seem to be parodied in the right way, whilst keeping a slight bit of realism to stop this slipping into one of those awful 'random' fics.

You've done well once again RK. :)

- Dixie A. Stonehall. x x x

I hope you enjoy writing this as much as I enjoy reading it. :)

I was already laughing at the excessive use of allitertion in the first section - and I didn't stop until I began writing this review. :D

You really know which little things to rag on, don't you. :)

I loved the idea of making Bowser talk in noob internet speak - rather amusing. :)

- But just like the rest of the fic; this is a well-written piece of hilarious parody. :)

Sorry I'm late with these reviews, I know you don't mind. :)

- Dixie A. Stonehall. x x x

I'm so glad you finally got your own fic posted up here, RK. :)

Sorry I didn't find it sooner.

I'm a huge fan of the Paper Mario series, so this was an instant hit with me. :D

Your sense of humour is outstanding, you had me in stitches numerous times; especially at:

“I THINK THE CASTLE’S HAVING AN ORGASM!”

At times I was wondering how you didn't run out of these witty wisecracks. :)

You did great at keeping the characters within their roles, yet making them out to be blundering idiots at the same time - highly effective, very amusing. :)

I think I'll be adding this to my Paper Mario C2 archive. It's a bit dead, it needs some livening up. :)

Roll on chapter two!

- Your first reviewer;

- Dixie Astrid Stonehall. x x x