this is good but will you ever update it

this is good will you update it soon this is a horrible clifhanger congratulations(spelling?)

I really really want to know what happened when you toldHarry that Dumbledore dies

This is epic so far, though it sounds like it has prequels . . .

i luved it! are you going to write these girls in the other books as well (such as harry potter. oo i can see it now. "i was so upset when sdumbledore died!" "dumbledore died? when?") LOL!

Excellent, excellent story! It's very inaginative, and I absolutely love how you portray yourself and your friend. You have a few spelling mistakes, but all in all, this is a great story and I look forward to reading more.

ha

i thought that was funny

i. luv. it! whic most like?

yay! lol. she told harry dumbledore dies. hehe. i completely forgot that resa was pregnant until i read this. i haven't read inkspell in a long time. this is funny! keep updating!

fun fun fun! you and your friend are very

this is so fricken cool! and funny. i'm particularly a fan of the whole 'coulda had a V8' thing, it's hilarious!

this is so awesome and funny you should really write more!

Oh wow! That's /the/ best fan fiction I've ever read! Your really talented and the only criticism I can give is that you have a few spelling mistakes. Inkheart is my favorite book. As dumb as this sounds, it helped me through tough times. I can't wait for the next chapter! By the way, Death Note is my life. L is so hot. x3

Just a couple of teensy grammar thingys in the third chapter - "'You mean your friends?' Meggie exclaimed." Your should be You're. there was one more, but I don't remember it...

I'm really liking the story. It's sweet.

I like your story. It's interesting...