Great story. I especially like how the enemies were just referred to as Bad Things for a while. Love all the snark.

Fantastic fic. Very Original Flavor. Loved it.

Very good story!
Gave me some interesting ideas.
Never written a Harry Dresden fanfic.
This could be the start of something beautiful...
(But more likely the start of something that will get me in trouble with Mab and turned into an Hound. Man. I hate it when that happens!)

Excellent story. You really captured Dresden's voice, and the Pinky & the Brain ref made me chuckle. Hope to see more from you.

I got the warm and fuzzies and giggles reading this! The "Dresden army" are such an awesome wise-cracking yet totally coordinated/gel'ed group- Mouse is particularly expressive(!) and fun, as is the Dresden/Murphy chemistry, Murphy as the kick-ass guns-and-bullets gal, Molly as wildly talented wizard-in-training, Thomas and Ramirez as vanity-incarnates, and pink-blobs as... well pink-blobs!

Thanks for a lovely read!

Now I'm curious about the beginning of the story... I liked the monsters, though I'm curious to know whether the alarm affected more people outside. A solid piece of work; 4/5.

I really loved the way you managed to capture Dresden's narration style. It fit perfectly. Good job!

This is pretty good. In many ways, it's like a mini Dresden Files novel. All the characters are IC, and the plot moves nicely. Also, the action is written well.

One or two somewhat offbeat or incongruous bits of dialogue here and there, but nothing too jarring.

My favourite line was the bit at the end "…the usual 'death to Harry Dresden' schtick". This basically sums up all the Dresden books in one go.

Nice job, overall!

-ProudtobePlug

Excellent! Good characterizations and banter. You may have "crammed" people into the story, but it doesn't feel forced.

I like that the Bad Things and their motivations were ambiguous: didn't stretch cannon out of shape or bog the scene down with explanation. Besides, Harry gets attacked enough that even he gets confused about who and why...

Thanks for such a fun fic. I laughed out loud a couple of times.

Good job making that sound like such a typical day. You nailed the tone and voice.

'Nice weather we're having.'

'I know, I created it.'

Fantastic line.

It's even better when you can attach Bill Cosby's voice to it. He used it in his stand-up show "Bill Cosby is a Very Funny Fellow - RIGHT!" in 1963.

I guess it's true: great minds DO think alike. ;-)

A very well done Original Flavor quickfic that manages to pack more power and interesting interplay than most sprawling epics on this site.

You have my praise and my thanks.

Lol, awesome story!

Awesome! You did a great job portraying the characters I could see this happening in the Drsdenverse...sure your not Jim Butcher in disguise? ;)lol

extra bonus point for fitting all my fav characters in there together...wish we could have this scene in a book! extra extar bonus points if you would make some sorta sequel to it!

That was extermley enjoyable. Something like an extension of the actual books. I'm glad to have read it.