Oh dear, you seem to have made me cry. Congratulations _,

I'd love to know where you got the inspiration for this story. It's very VERY good.

This is good. This is really good. Awesome even. It was so depressing, but it was so good

You've got some good ideas, but you desperately need a Beta reader. Even if you need to work with grammar and style a bit, you're on your way to becoming a decent writer. Keep practicing.

*sob* that was soo beautiful! I guess in the beginning, riku seemed like a selfish jerk, but I guess if you really love someone, you want them to be happy above everything else, so you let them go, and hope that maybe one day, they'll return to you because they know that their place is next to you.

Ohmigod, You Dont Understand How Much I Love This...

I think this story is quite beautiful, though dark it may be.

your story is amazing! i love how beautiful and poetic it is. your way with words is enviable, you should definitely write more :)

Omg!

Wow.

That was greatly written XD

It was kinda sad though but i really liked it.

Great job. :D

wow, I loved it.

It wasn't descriptive or a normal story, yet it still moved me and definitely made me think. It was greatly written. :)

I like this story but I can't really say why. Maybe it's something different from what is normally put out there. I don't understand why Sora thought Riku was being cruel with him. Things worked out at the end so I guess that's ok.

that was so sad! i accutally had to stop for a while and do something else it hurted so much!

I liked this fic. It was awfully desperate and I actually felt sorry for Sora. :C

I don't find Riku's logic very working, but maybe I can live with it. x) How did he know where to look for Sora?

And did you mean "Unconditional love" instead of "Unconventional love"?

Well i gotta say you made me cry..well almost but more than once -.-

I guess it's quite different from the things i usually read (happy stuff and rainbows xD)

But i really liked it .

I am so very attached to this story, not only because of the quality of the work but also because of the reality behind Sora's character. I was seeing someone who was quite nearly identical to him in this particular piece and I think you captured his thought process, actions and emotion flawlessly. The story brought me to a lot of tears at the end - really, you did a superb job with this.