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Whats up? Why is the 8th chapter the 7th and the 7th the 8th? Befuddles. Had to go to 7 to find out what was up.

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Wow, I am impressed. You really made it coherent and interesting and still kept some of the best parts style wise from the earlier chapter. I almost want to take credit, that's how well you did. But this was inside you the whole time. You really are a very adaptive writer.

Wait...you edited the 7th chapter and made the 8th chapter into what the 7th was previously?

Now I guess I'll have to wait for Ch-9...please make Kankuro come back soon!

I like how you added the flower thing into this...cute! And Ino not liking her long hair is a bit off - seeing as she grew her hair out again in Shippuuden and Sakura didn't. Maybe you could put in some deep reason for that! Ino's so pretty! And why's Sakura crying?

Interesting story, but the last chapter was very rushed. You had a lot of things happen and some very serious things. And you didn't give it any time you rushed it all together. It came off as very confusing. One minute a kid is dead, she trying to remember the next's name , then she's a prisoner, and now she's back. Those three separate events could have each been their own chapter. I know this is supposed to be romance but, you could have had her thought about her own life as a genin or stray thoughts about what had been said to her. As it stands I am very confused. I almost feel like Sakura is goign to tell her that it was all a dream. Because it seems like some fragmented dream without much sense or direction.

Wow...a kid died? What about the other 2 and the Jounin? Was he a traitor? It was pretty easy for her to sneak out of the prison, aye? Lol! She didn't even report her mission to Tsunade, heehee!

Thank God for Sakura and Ino love-hate relationship! I'm beginning to seriously dislike Shika in this fic...he's TOO mean! :'-(

I can't wait for Ch-8! Kankuro?

You needed to make it clearer when she left the spiders body. other than that it was a fair chapter, and what of the team mates? Dead? SC

Yay for an enraged Ino! I really liked this chapter,laughter is really what I needed. Keep it up and hope to read more soon! SC

I love this story! I've been waiting for this update for SO long that I forgot what had happened previously and had to re-read it...could you please update sooner next time? _-

YOSH! KANKURO IS SO HOT! I'M GOING CRAZY-HORNY HERE! Hehe! Sorry about my spaz attack...he's so hot, and Ino needs a guy like that...I wonder when she'll find out it was him who gave her the 'gentle kiss'...*sigh*...!

I like! I like! I like! I like! I like!

I can't wait for the update! Please do so soon, the "suspense" is killing me!

Ino is getting crushed in this fic! How did Garra get infront of Ino? Hope to read more soon! SC

Poorest Ino. Hope to read more soon! SC

Awe! Poor Ino! Shattered! Ready and waiting to find out the next turn! SC

lol loves the chapter is she gunna run away or something? lol i wanna find out lol update soon

Random...typical Ino! _ Hope to read more soon! SC