As an avid reader of naruto fanfics, its sad to see one pass into the forgotten catagory. having tried mutiple times and failing just as much could people please adopt/adapt this story? i must have re-read it over 25 times and its still not complete or updated. . . please?

Great job

when will you be out continue it

He wants to be a KONOHA ninja after that shit? Wow, such refined bullshit.

The RIGHT WORD IS ''SENSE'' YOU DUMBASS USE GOOGLE FOR FUCK'S SAKE

Good job ruined the fanfic in one chapter don't even think about asking for a reason you fag.

Couldn't understand what the fuck was going after that rasen appears in front of sasuke

cant wait for new chapters

This is good if you are going to continue I can't wait if not...awwwww ;-;
I also liked the Palpatine/Sidius act he did with Sasuke lol

If anyone likes this shit they deserve to be shot

This is complete fucking shit go die in the worst way for writing this piece of crap

*face palm* is there ANYONE Revan did NOT sleep with.

...after battle urges huh? While it is true, I can feel my respect for Kushina vanishing. Also I don't like this new Hinata. What the hell is the point of using Hinata if your just going to change her personality. You might as well have changed her from the very beginning. Or at least dedicated more time to her transition. Right now it feels rushed.

... urg

that was good keep the chapters coming