I love it, Kyoya's so awesome. :D

I really like your style of writing; your sentence structure. It's so sophisticated-sounding and colorful. :)

Ohh, I absolutely loved this :)

The atmosphere is perfect, and the whole story fits straight into the crazy world of Ouran. Your characterisation is perfect - Tamaki with his dramatics and flamboyance; the twins with their mischief and twincest; Haruhi with her commoner practicality and immunity to club's rich boy antics; and Kyouya, Kyouya is simply perfect - devious, cool, detached and observant, all with a wonderful sense of humour :D

You write incredibly well; I'm surprised (and indignant on your behalf) that you haven't received more reviews!

Many thanks for a great read )

Bwahahah! All fear Kyouyas 'innocent' smile! XD

Ahahaa...

this was amazing. great job.