Hey :D I just wanted to tell you that I kinda like how this was going and the overall length of the chapter. I love your oc, too. Anyway, I hope you update soon :D

Lindsey

Hi, I love this story. It is an amazing idea for a story and I hope you keep writing.

Why such the long delay in updates? This is amazing so far. It is well written and has an extremely interesting plot, that I can see so far. I really look forward to seeing where you are taking this, so please update again soon.

Take Care,

N.M.M.

I like this story D. I can't wait for the next chapter D

Very good storyline so far. Please update soon! It night be helpful though to use a small symbol between scene changes, such as when it switched from at school to Akari's home. I usually use the number 8 between the paragraphs.

Holy crow, please write more! this story totally kicks ass!

Please update again soon!

Wow! This story is really good! Okay, now I am officially hooked. - You have a nice writing style. I look forward to your next update!

I'm loving this story.

Hope you update soon

~Emma

good job, i like your fic, i love yoko and kurama talking to each other. can't wait to see where your story goes.

This seems really good so far! I like the even, non-Mary Sueish treatment you're giving Akari, not too much description but she still has a distinct character. Keep it up! :)

Oh! wowy! I love it! Very very, very! amazing job!

Update soon mkays? D

This is great. No one seem OOC or Mary sue, And Youko isn't a perverted fox, he actually is cold, and cruel! Your doing a great job, and I can't wait to read more.

Update soon, please!

i likes it! good intro. nice way to wake ppl up in the morning. i'll be looking for an update pretty soon.

write more. this looks interesting