This is amazing, please update.

I like this story and I hope you continue it.

This story is totally awesome!

:)

LOVE this take on Azula. She's so much more than the one-dimensional character all of her non-fans seems to paint her as being. Can't wait to continue reading.

Interesting AU idea you have here... you've written dry!detached!Azula quite nicely and the rationale is beautifully done. I can imagine her contemplating how Ozai has influenced her...

I hope you continue this soon... if you're going along with the canon plotline then the later episodes will be very interesting...

I really like this story. Please update soon.

Nice work. The concept and execution is very nice and I look forward to seeing how events both track and diverge from cannon.

Thanks for the chapter.

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You're really actually doing quite a good job. I enjoyed this chapter as much as the last one. Kudos.

This fic is very insiteful. It gives motivation behind the actions of Ozai and Azula that was lacking in the show.

I like how you show that even if Azula's feelings may be different, the cold, calculating intelligence is still in place.

One quibble-in the reunion scene-you repeat the dialogue in a couple of spots. That can be a good technique when you're showing the same scene from differing viewpoints. In this fic, it doesn't seem to serve any purpose except as an indication of Azula's thoughts during those speeches. (Just my opinion and not a slam at your style)

All in all this is a great fic and am looking forward to more.

I do enjoy seeing a story where Azula isn't really the villain, even though she is quite manipulative. I would love to see more of this. Please update soon.

Interesting idea. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with it.

I really like how you explained why Azula's fire turned blue. That was really very insightful, and the ending sentence really summed up the chapter. Actually, I think this would make a great oneshot.

This was really very IC, and I enjoyed reading it. Update soon :)

I'd like to see more of this. Please update soon.

Excellent story. I didn't think the characters were all that OOC actually. In fact, what you wrote was very believable (although, that could just be my personal feeling about Azula's character influencing me: that you can't have a father like Ozai and not have it mess you up... she's just as messed up as Zuko, if not more so).

I think this works very well as a one-shot :)