You tended to do a lot of time/subject jumps toward the end that were hard to keep track of, but otherwise stellar job. Can’t wait to read the sequel

Awesome story!

I, personally, think Starscream is going to rip out Sunstorm's spark and eat it in front of everyone, to demonstrate what he would do if any of them tried to get Barricade into spark mating when she doesn't want to.

They are both complete retards. Do they have any brain function? Is there anything in Sam's brain or Bumblebee's processor? I don't think there is.

Bumblebee is an idiot. Sunny and Sides are a hundred times more idiot than the Camero. Sam is a thousand times more idiot than the Terror Twins.

"The entire reason I brought Swindle even into the story was to kill him off."
Me: Yaaaaaaaassssss! That's a great reason for bringing that conmech into the story! Just so he can DIE!

I just want to bash Ironhide over the helm repeatedly with a crowbar to demonstrate how angry and frustrated I am with his attitude. Slagging weapons specialist...*grumble, grumble, grumble*

This is everything I never new I needed.

Best fanfic I've ever read :-) Masz wspaniałe poczucie humoru :-)

Man this chapter at the end nearly made me cry.

awesome story )

Soundwave This is perfect, just fragging amaze-balls!

Oh Primus! Skywarp, I fragging love you!

Am guessing does not hat mean both sound wave and thundercracker are femme and that frenzy and others are really sparkling lol

THEY CALL THEMSELVES HUMAN?! ALL THEY CARE ABOUT IS MONEY AND TECHNOLOGY! TORTURING A CHILD! IT'S PEOPLE LIKE THEM THAT MAKE ME ASHAMED TO BE A HUMAN! I hope Starscream makes them feel so much pain that they'll BEG for death! I hope he gives them a slow, horrid, traumatizing, agonizing, shameful death! Do to them what they're doing to Barricade and Blacklight!

...I'm serious about the me being ashamed of being a human because of people like this. And it's even worse to know that people like this actually exist. I think we all deserve what will happen to us eventually.