I'm pretty sure the creature is Babidi

please continue it as U SOON KEEP TO UR so ANNOYING when u guys leave it incomplete. i wish u realize this and complete it.

This story is great...please find the inspiration to complete it!

Omg this is so good! Please update! I need this to continue!

Y havent u finished this finished this fiction

Who ate you .Please update I love this freaking super

That was awesome! Can you add like a family thing. Like a trunks vegeta and bulma moment.

You haven't updated in a while. I'm curious what would happen to Prince Vegeta. I just hate him. He is not like the Vegeta in DBZ. The real Vegeta was far more great than this one. Hope you update soon. Can't wait for some more exciting chapters.
Regards,
Fati Sid

I must say that I am completely in love with this story! It will be quite interesting to see how much worse Prince Vegeta will become after he learns that Trunks is actually his elder and much stronger brother and thus the true crown prince of Vegetasei while he himself should have died on the day of their birth. As if that weren't bad enough I'm sure learning that the only reason he's alive at all is due to Trunk's mercy will only serve to upset him further, thus allowing him to fall even deeper into Babidee's control, assuming he doesn't just decide to offer himself up to the evil "Lord" willingly in exchange for more power. I know it's been years since you've updated this, or any of your other stories, but I do hope that you might eventually consider finishing this one day!

i know, it's been 3 years but please, update this! It's amazing!

i never really liked little Vegeta he didnt even care about his mother, the one person that gave him life. power was all he thought of and that was his down fall...Trunks needs to stop hiding his true self maybe his brother would know better, idk...soo sad what happened to Bulma i was crying, whats a mother to do when her own child trys to killer her, who knows?...please please please update this soon i need to know how this all ends

Hi! Please forgive the fact that I havent been reviewing the previous chapters. I started this fic today (7-16-12) and simply could not review knowing there was another chapter that I had yet to read! It was an absolutely amzing read! Fantastic details, and deffinately a worthy start to the sequel of The Wise King. Please continue to update.
Until then,
KP

oh drear. Shoulda saw that one coming! Update soon please!

I wish you could continue your story is very interesting, all the events are great, greetings

awesome!