Great nice

Great nice

Great

Sometimes Teenagers like Eric do stupid things; sometimes they don't realize what should've come first...until it's too late. And when was a therapist? And now he died a brutal death!

I love this. I seriously thought at first that you had killed Elliot off, but I was so relieved when I read that it had been a misunderstanding on Olivia's part. And the ending was brilliant. I can't wait for you to put up the rest. Even though it has been years since you updated, I want to read more. Please?

I loved 'Ry' almost as much as I love Elliot.

Wonderful3 Every chapter is just brilliant.

I love it. I love it. I love it. I actually started to believe that Elliot was dead (I haven't actually seen the whole of the final episode- only parts of it) but after reading more into the chapter, I was glad it only a nightmare! All the chapters are very well written. Can't wait for more.

Monkeywand

great update!

OMSVU! Wait didn't they confess thier love in the last chapter?

Hahahaha! Wow, that ending was hysterical. However, let's start at the beginning, shall we?

My House - United States - Friday, July 3 - 8:52 p.m.

Oh, my goodness, Bensler, what did you do? Bensler, what the heck did you do? What the freaking heck did you freaking do, Bensler? Aie! Bensler, I'm going to kill you! No! I was just kidding, I swear! You can fix it so I won't have to kill you! Bensler! Please, Bensler, please! What have you done? AH! No, no, no, no, NO! What have you done? How could you? How could you do this to me, Bensler? I thought we were friends! How dare you betray me like that! NO!

My House - United States - Friday, July 3 - 8:57 p.m.

Oh, thank you, Bensler! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Now that I can think straight and not fantasize about killing you before you can finish this post-ep collection, I shall get down to the body of my review. First of all, DON'T YOU EVER SCARE ME LIKE THAT AGAIN! I was reminded of an awesome quote from this episode.

ELLIOT: [in reference to Stuckey] I'm gonna kill him.

RYAN: [R.I.P.] Yeah, I'll dump the body.

Perfect, except I would have had to change the name in brackets to Bensler, not Stuckey. But, you didn't make me do that. Remember the lynch mob you mentioned in one of your A/Ns a while ago? They're moving off your front lawn again. That whole thing was very well written. The emotion you displayed, the raw fear and anguish Olivia felt during her nightmare (Thank you, Lord, it was a nightmare!), the careful tiptoeing around exactly what they each wanted the other to say, the ending with the playful banter, I loved it all! Absolutely beautiful. I can't wait for the rest of your chapters!

Now, about the WONDERFUL news you mentioned earlier, YAY! Marish and Chris have returned to save me from the frightening abyss that is life without SVU. Happiness is again in my vocabulary. Stephanie March is coming back for 10/11 episodes, did you know? And, apparently they've planned out the season premiere already. This NYPD cop Nate Something-Or-Other saves a rape victim and only wants to talk to Benson and Stabler. Hmm...

Update!

God Bless,

~ally

OMG! SERIOUSLY ... OMG!

At first I thought Elliot was theone who had died, but then you had him to at Liv's...

OMG but what I liked the most was them discussing about the kiss... the end... was SO SWEET!

The whole chapter was excellent, touching, well written... wow! Terrific job! I loved it!

Long live E/O!

Update soon please :D

~Karen

at first i was crying because i thought you changed what really happened cause i thought elliot was dead, but i really like this chapter, best by far.

actually, do you think you could build off of this? it's gonna kill me to wait for the rest of the episodes in between.

OMG! I loved it! I hope you update soon!

AW! So cute! I agree there were emotions running high in those scenes. I love how Elliot is all jumbled up and confused in his half-unconscious state. I also enjoy the accurate portrayal of the female and male minds. The men, if they know what they want, tend to just go for it, whereas the women see all the problems and logicalize everything. I like how that's shown in El/Liv mindsets. You convey so many simple human instincts in these stories, and I love that about them. They're...enlightening.

Please keep it up! Can't wait for Persona!

God bless,

ally