Reviews for Desires |
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phineashiccup chapter 10 . 10/21/2019 Love this story can't wait to see if Sakura will tell Sasuke the truth. And I think she should stay with Sai |
Arw165 chapter 10 . 7/30/2016 1. Before this chapter I was gonna complain about Sasuke not noticing sth is wrong with Sakura. I mean, he should find it suspicious she doesn't want to have sex with him anymore (since stripping means having love bites for the world to see). At least now he knows about hickies. 2. Why does Naruto think Neji was using him for sex? It's not like the blond knows about his evil plots, right? 3. Who should Sakura stay with? Neither. They are both dicks, she's a bitch too, but it doesn't mean she should become an item with either of them. Sai is a child's father, though. That asshole should take resposibility for it (you don't create new life to get revenge). Honestly, nobody, aside from Naruto and Sasuke, cares about the baby! By the way, you can't determine the sex of a baby after only 4 weeks. I think you over complicated the story with having Neji and Sakura become fuck buddies ("friends" with benefits would be to positive description), introducing Sai and Naruto's lost american family. But I still would like to find out what's next. |
DnMikado chapter 10 . 6/12/2016 Nooo, dont stop here! Its soo god, i cant stop reading! |
Native26 chapter 10 . 6/30/2015 Even though this was last updated in 2010 you should still update |
Guest chapter 10 . 1/1/2015 Sakurä did not deserve anybody and why the hell u not update |
Sakeena85 chapter 10 . 9/20/2014 Love it update more chapters please |
Guest chapter 10 . 2/24/2014 make more chapters please |
JxiPLUSxi chapter 10 . 5/30/2013 sasuke! shove away sakura!XD she is such a bitch! hahaha.. O_O naru was running away.. is kisame the one who would find naru? or wud deidara go to japan and see him?! i wanna know whats gonna happen! so please update! my sanity is suffering!XD hahhaha MORE MOREMOREMOREMORE MOREMORE! UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET_T |
Fuckthat chapter 10 . 10/4/2012 UPDATE POR FAVOR PLEASE ONEGAI WHATEVER |
BlackKittyMoon chapter 2 . 8/11/2012 Ahahahahah |
MafiasElite chapter 2 . 10/18/2011 Desires Chapter 2 Review (writing as I read): Love your little comments XD. Yo! It's been awhile. Hope you remember me? Lol You are perfect for writing Sakura characters that creep me out...*shivers* Been AFL (away from life) the past few months but I'm back! I hope you find a good beta soon. Good luck with that!...TTTT I don't want Saskura to have Sasuke's babies..DX..hmmm well at least Sakura is smart..Kinda Evil.. I like it.. Dang Not going to share him? You really made her possesive huh? We'll just have to see what Naruto does... He He.. Wow, love Sakura's third reasoning, No more babies XD. Couldn't stop smiling. In Sakura's mInd- Positive thoughts Sasuke That's not healthy, couldn't she think about other positive things like Miso Ramen? *Hint* *Hint* *Wink* *Wink* XD ha ha I bet the reason Ino stuttered was because she saw a 'cute, hot, hotter guy any type of man that may be in front will leave her speechless'..I don't think baby blue or azure fits the descripting, maybe cerulean or sapphire XD. Dang i'd faint too if Naruto looked at me like that. XD. First impression of Naruto's Character: Not quite what I imagined he'd be like but he sounds like he has a big secret he wants to hide.. Awww Sasuke experiences love at first sight XD. I love Sasukes inside thoughts and you just got to love Naruto XD. To lazy to login... |
Kyoki13 chapter 10 . 7/26/2011 i think she should stick with sai, i mean he does love her after all, and it is his baby, i think it would only make sense that way. i like how you threw a little mix in there, and made deidera narutos brother, they have very similar traits so it makes pretty good sense, im so curious to read what happens next! pleas hurry and update soon! -p.s i see your a writer who likes to create a new story when not even finished others, that kind of sad-ins readers and dissapoints them, not because you created a new story but because it will take away time from updating the one said reader is currently reading. at least thats my what i think. either way, im sure your readers enjoy reading what ever you dish out, i know i do. |
CorruptedCharlie chapter 10 . 2/26/2011 PLEASE UPDATE ALREADY! I'M DYiNG HERE XD |
AnjoRemix chapter 10 . 1/21/2011 OMG SUKE GET RID OF HER ALREADY! and i'm still reading ur fics o.o* ish that good? XDD 333 UPDATE! 3 |
Harushina Neko chapter 10 . 1/17/2011 Update!...please |