I must say that this is one of the best fics that I ever read, and I had really hoped that you would come back to it at some point.

If you have lost your inspiration (understandable if you have), would it be possible to state how it may have ended?

That said, thanks for writing this to begin with!️

I love it, but it is sad that the author quit writing this

Great story! Even though it's unfinished, I thoroughly enjoyed what you've written. I really liked how you've handled this crossover. Though Nanoha and Fate are powerful in this universe, you've written it so that there is still 'real' conflict to be resolved and our heroines have to go through problems and grow. Unlike other fics, where the introduced characters are *so* powerful that they are somehow the cure-all for that universe's problems with very little effort. An ending would be much appreciated, but thanks for sharing!

I have one small issue, when Fate ordered Bardiche to Set Up, he replied with Raising Heart's reply of "Standby, Ready. Set Up" instead of his usual "Get Set" just a small typo

please come back and update

Well, the sword is usually the idiots choice in these kind of things.

Well, if fanon had teached me something, is that Nanoha doesn't want to be a Queen.

Well, this is gonna be fun!

Big brother to the rescue!

Well, can’t he contact a ship for pick up?

Well, she will eventually leave, right?

Yeah, that happens when you don't think things.

I am sure Nanoha will eventually get her device back.

Well, I wonder how Nanoha is doing?

Uh... so you won't show were they ended up?