Reviews for Something Gone Wrong
Guest chapter 4 . 1/21/2018
Max is such a brat. And what kind of small house has five bedrooms and an office? I'm kind of hating her. I like the story a lot so far, though.
Guest chapter 35 . 10/19/2017
go after the you like after all in the creation of life brothers and sisters married one another
Guest chapter 35 . 7/5/2017
Coincidence
Dont callmemaxi chapter 13 . 7/5/2017
Omg fang did those things why did you do that?
Dontcallmemaxi chapter 9 . 7/5/2017
Really her personality had to be like that and lingerie?
Guest chapter 3 . 7/5/2017
No why be like that
book thief 27 chapter 11 . 12/7/2015
Even though this action/ thoughtFang had was incestual, it's still pretty sweet.
zoxy2 chapter 35 . 10/2/2015
You're practically writing a story all about it... you know what to do :)

-Zoxy
threeheadedhydreigon chapter 35 . 6/14/2015
Is he your age? You never told us that, so I'm just going to assume he's really young and you're a pedophile.

(I'm kidding, of course.)
Guest chapter 35 . 11/14/2014
Hehehe. You should know what to do best. Just please don't end up fucking him on a couch... :) *snickers*
Guest chapter 35 . 8/6/2014
If u think ur step bro is hot or fine or whatever, technically since yalll aren't related by blood , y'all could date. Just tell him how u fell. But hide it from ur parents
RisingRaven chapter 35 . 7/2/2014
Omg haha! I'm just saying but I burst out laughing when I read this. But also I feel sorry for ya. And I love your story.
Fly On
katzapped chapter 35 . 5/29/2014
Aren't you allowed to marry your step brother? You aren't related at all you have different parents so you can. Yes you can go for it if you want to. :D
katzapped chapter 33 . 5/29/2014
OH CRAP WHO DID YOU GIVE THOSE KEYS TOO?
katzapped chapter 4 . 5/29/2014
Fang's not being that mean, he's just quiet and sad... and Max is being a bitch.
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