Short but good.

That's it no reaction to his family

you should add a part to the story that shows how the Mitchum reacts to the news.

So far so good i cant wait to read the reactions from Logans parents

I know youve ignored the story for a while BUT PLEASEEEEEE FINISH IT PLEASE!

Please Write More.~~~!

That was great. Update soon.

i really like how you started off! is there going to be more?

keep going plez plez plez!

love it.

love the story please update soon !

update, please!

Good start! Logan took the news pretty well though I can't wait to see the Huntzberger's reactions...LOL!

i really like it so far, and was wondering if you had thought of making it so that logan never found out that she was a hayden, and when she was about to tell him he asked her to marry her at graduation and they broke up so she never had a chance to say anything about it. and through some kind of journey in getting back together and becoming a power couple. That was sorta the impression that i got from the summary, but it turned out to be like all the other one shots how after rory tells logan shes rich and they cant wait to rub it in logans parents faces. i dont mean to be offensive i like your writing and was hoping if you would write about it since im a reader not a writer and wanted to read a story like that. anyways please update soon

great storyline... continue