Reviews for Overlord, No Overlady |
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vampwhisper chapter 7 . 1/30/2011 Chapter seven needs some editing. It also doesn't seem to be as clear and filled out as the other chapters... |
GameJunkie41 chapter 7 . 1/25/2011 I love the concept of a female overlord as well as the story. I hope to see another chapter soon |
Dragon Man 180 chapter 7 . 12/24/2010 Hah, Andromeda played those idiots for fools, I can't wait to see their reactions when they find out she's the knight fighting the Swamp Monster. But I think Andromeda and the Monster teaming up to eliminate the old fart would be awesome. |
cobraviper chapter 7 . 12/15/2010 interesting chapter hope for another update soon. I really find this story fun to read |
vampwhisper chapter 6 . 8/15/2010 I really love your Overlady fanfiction. You capture everyone's character perfectly, and your female lead has truly admirable qualities, not like all the Mary Sues hanging around at all. Could you write more please? I've been waiting a long while for an update, and it'd make me sad if something of this quality was dropped. |
AccountDelete1 chapter 6 . 5/23/2010 interesting story |
chaos-dark-lord chapter 6 . 5/3/2010 Its cool, and she is forming her harem without meaning to! thanks for the update, I shall be waiting anxiously for the next chap. |
Dragon Man 180 chapter 6 . 4/30/2010 Yay, blues! I can't wait to see how things go for Andromeda, but I like Erebus better than Harith so far. |
Lordriochi chapter 5 . 1/30/2010 XD Nice work! I love the story, but do put "more" editing in the grammar! It is confusing sometimes! |
James chapter 5 . 1/28/2010 you should totaly have Andromeda wake up and see Harih and then her beat the shit outta him |
John chapter 1 . 1/27/2010 At first i was alittle skiddish about a female Overlord... but i must say you did a very good job at making an "Overlady" and your attention to detail was pretty good to |
spike tashy chapter 5 . 10/11/2009 OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. WILL ANDROMEDA HORRIBLE MOLEST HARITH? WHO KNOWS! cant wait. |
The Black Rose Sorceress chapter 5 . 9/5/2009 hey interesting story you got there. :D it even gave an idea for one of my own xD (Don't you worry, i won't steal any ideas or plot.) anyway, great story so far (although i must say i do not like very much of Hirath behaviour) what about their ages? how old is Lady Andromeda and Harith? I'm curious to find out, so update soon :D |
Ryld chapter 5 . 9/5/2009 great story keep it coming |
DMacIntosh chapter 5 . 8/29/2009 sweet story there dude, i bet andromeda is going to be pissed when she wakes up with him lying next to her lol |