Reviews for Overlord, No Overlady |
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![]() ![]() Chapter seven needs some editing. It also doesn't seem to be as clear and filled out as the other chapters... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the concept of a female overlord as well as the story. I hope to see another chapter soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hah, Andromeda played those idiots for fools, I can't wait to see their reactions when they find out she's the knight fighting the Swamp Monster. But I think Andromeda and the Monster teaming up to eliminate the old fart would be awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting chapter hope for another update soon. I really find this story fun to read |
![]() ![]() I really love your Overlady fanfiction. You capture everyone's character perfectly, and your female lead has truly admirable qualities, not like all the Mary Sues hanging around at all. Could you write more please? I've been waiting a long while for an update, and it'd make me sad if something of this quality was dropped. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its cool, and she is forming her harem without meaning to! thanks for the update, I shall be waiting anxiously for the next chap. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, blues! I can't wait to see how things go for Andromeda, but I like Erebus better than Harith so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD Nice work! I love the story, but do put "more" editing in the grammar! It is confusing sometimes! |
![]() ![]() you should totaly have Andromeda wake up and see Harih and then her beat the shit outta him |
![]() ![]() At first i was alittle skiddish about a female Overlord... but i must say you did a very good job at making an "Overlady" and your attention to detail was pretty good to |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. WILL ANDROMEDA HORRIBLE MOLEST HARITH? WHO KNOWS! cant wait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey interesting story you got there. :D it even gave an idea for one of my own xD (Don't you worry, i won't steal any ideas or plot.) anyway, great story so far (although i must say i do not like very much of Hirath behaviour) what about their ages? how old is Lady Andromeda and Harith? I'm curious to find out, so update soon :D |
![]() ![]() great story keep it coming |
![]() ![]() ![]() sweet story there dude, i bet andromeda is going to be pissed when she wakes up with him lying next to her lol |