Reviews for Formal Dining |
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2016 Haha 8th time I've read this! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2015 Pretty good, but there were a lot of typos. Aside from that, I don't usually like drug fics, but I guess it's better than Near acting so out of character. Other than that, it was very well written. |
Kinetic-Psychopathy chapter 1 . 7/2/2013 Rivals with benefits... ;) |
lightningpelt chapter 1 . 10/4/2011 I have never read anything cannon MxN (or even anything AU, with the exception of Bring Me to Life/City of Delusion) that I did not hate. And then there's this. Oh god this...! This was a beautiful work of sheer genius! *dies* The end had me laughing hysterically. "Rivals with benefits." Truly epic. Loved the bit with Halle, too. xD So yeah. Amazing. Fantastic. *blows kisses* My dreams will be quite interesting tonight. |
umiagna chapter 1 . 7/20/2010 Lol, poor Halle xD I liked the 'no longer where they rivals, but rivals with benefits' part. Made me laugh D Your writing is so good, I love it all! |
TXXXXXX chapter 1 . 4/29/2010 ''they were rivals whith benefits". I love it. very good FF. I dont think N would be so submissive, but i like it this way ! |
Celestial Blood chapter 1 . 4/18/2010 *trying to control fangirlism* the only word that keeps coming into my mind is "yum" ufufufu :L the MelloXnear sex scene will be in my yaoi filled dreams tonight *w* |
Mattx13 chapter 1 . 3/7/2010 Win man. I have to tell you what happened with this fanfiction: I was gone for five minutes, getting a snack and I see my friend sitting in front of the computer. "Dude, you okay?" "...Yeah." "Wanna borrow some of my clothes?" "...Why would I need your clothes?" "Because, I can see you read Formal Dining, and you don't read fanfiction a lot. So you probably went and either had a nosebleed, or came in your jeans. So, you need a shirt or pants?" "...Both." It took me a while to stop laughing. xD |
patterns-at-dusk chapter 1 . 11/10/2009 Bahahahaha, this is my new favorite one shot. it's absolutly hilarious |
HelloMyNameIs-InsertNameHere chapter 1 . 9/28/2009 Wow. Normally I hate Near, but that was insane. It was really really good. The end was hystarical! But, I had a feeling Near'd been drugged. It was awesome though. |
ZoneRobotnik chapter 1 . 8/20/2009 LOL, I know how Halle feels. Is Near upset that they haven't had sex since then? XD Nice story! |
Yaoi Mobile chapter 1 . 8/7/2009 This one hot was simply amazing. You have no idea how many times i've read it |
emeliiaaa chapter 1 . 8/6/2009 Awesome. That's all I can say really. :) |
DareRiver chapter 1 . 7/28/2009 LMFAO HALLE! I luffed it! X3 Sho awesome! |
Maddasahatter chapter 1 . 7/21/2009 Silly Near, taking food from Mello...XD I loved this, it was really cute, and not too over the top. Awesome job D |