The idea of Cloud with braces and glasses is adorable and wonderful. I love it!

Awe, nah I'm starting to think its just yiyr stories that help
bring the fandom to a new level of adorable, cause this is so sweet and I feel like I'm not praising all this enough, ahaha. Well anyways, much love and happy writing.

Awww, it's just sooo cute ! I actually squealed when I was reading it.

Aww! Seph and cloud are my favorite!

That is possibly the most sweetest and cutest thing that I've ever read!

Nice.

That was so cute. ;)

lkajds;jfad; omg this story is so cute AND SUCH A GREAT ADORABLE ENDING haha I seriously just cracked up at Sephiroth's lip getting caught in Cloud's braces, SO HORRIFYING AND YET RIDICULOUS. LOVE IT.

Awwwwww cute nerdy Cloud, so cute and nerdy XD

Awwwww...nerdy Cloud is so awfully sweet! People really need to write more of him!

Ahh, I'm going to headdesk myself. After so long, like months later, I cant believe I never remembered to review this. Such a cute oneshot! I wish I had remembered to review. *bangs head*

-Hana

LOL. BRACES. Poor Cloud, and poor Sephiroth but also poor Cloud and...ew.

...lol. Eww.

I about died when the...just...ew.

I leave you with that. Laughing and grossed out all at once. Ew. XDD

Aw, poor Cloud, but I'm glad Sephiroth and Zack 'get' him.

okay! okay! i read it! so sue me! i just couldn't wait and i have to say i LOVED this! well i already told you but still. cloud with braces and glasses! aw! and sephs all smitten by him and it's all like...aw! i added you to my faves and i added invisible molestation to my faves as well but they're not showing on my profile! something's wrong with my account! wtf! i'm doing it again and i'll do it a hundred million times if i have to! invisible molestation reading countdown: two days to go!

poor cloud. atleast he got sephiroth and zack :)