Nice. I think you nailed shenshua there too, good job. I've been binge reading your stuff and it's great I would certainly pay to watch animated from the chapters you've written, if only you could draw too..

Wooooo

Chapter was a bit short but its a perfect endinng to this story:-)

Ha I love how you write Shenhua:-)

Awesome:-)

Haha Revy:-)

"What's the magic word?"

"Now?" Revy didn't guess so much as order.

Freaking hilarious. Another fantastic story! Love it to bits. Even Chang is in character. You are awesome.

Thankyou for writing such a wonderful story.

great fic :) Once again I think you have everyone in character.

good

Cheeky ending there ;P Can't wait to get onto the next story!

great job again love how you had revy behave like a love sick sex crazed high school girl and how you had rock behave realy nice nice big time

As for Shenhua's english, I think you got it right. There was one line I found myself in disagreement with, ("Oh, this very good stupid whore, why not you tell everyone where we hiding?" I'd have written it "Why you not," rather that "Why not you,")but the rest was fine.

This was good, short but good

Nice touch with the Pantera song.

yay i loved this story too! you're so good at writing dialogue for Revy haha Good job!