I like your story but it just seems so out of Tam's character to just not stand by Syed.

just read this all over again... it's awesome, hope you will continue it! :)

Hi,

great story, I really loved to read it. What I like best is the way Syed and Christian live togehter. And I love Shabnam how she still cares so much about Syed and is so willing to accept Christian.

And then the part where Syed and Christin are maltreated by Qadim: It's really beautiful how you described the way each of them cares more for the other than for himself .

Thanks and don't let us wait too long for the next chapter.

YAY YAY YAY! FINALLY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE SAY THERE'S GOING TO BE MORE! I LOVE THIS PAIRING!

Yeh Christianaddict you updated. Brilliant writing as always.

Is this the end as it seems to be? Lovely fic.

I'm excited for the next chapter... you're doing a great job :)

x

Great writing. Excellent storyline.. sure wish Ch13 is coming soon :-)

I always love your writing so much, please update as soon as you can.

I'd JUST finished reading your pervious chapters when the updated one came through :D

Really sad she lost the baby, but cant wait for more!

I love that they are going together to the 'support group'

Great work! :D

Thnks - love this story. It was hard reading all that nonsense Zainab said but you've portrayed everything in a realistic way. Poor Sy. At least he has Christian but he was right not to marry Amira. That wouldn't be fair on her.

Fantastic fiction, loved the latest chapter.

Looking forward to reading the rest :D

x

Wow! Please update! Great characterization and I'm glad they ran away :)

That was an amazing and upsetting chapter. I think the way that you potrayed the masood family towards syed, was fantastic,by beening able to keep the characters personalities throughout the chapter.

I cant wait to see what happens next.

YOU SO HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS! IT IS AMAZING! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE TELL ME THERE'S GOING TO BE ANOTHER CHAPTER UP SOON?

I LOVE THIS PAIRING AND THEY SOO NEED TO COME OUT SOON!

Oh this is a sad chapter :( I don't like Masood turning on Zainab :( But I guess she needs to know the truth about herself LOL! Looking forward to the next Chryed :)