Reviews for Hired Help |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Don't be kiddin' me. This was great. The whole campfire song thing was too funny though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() FOR YOUR FIRST LEMON THAT WAS AMAZING. *NOSEBLEEDS* |
![]() ![]() i dont read much renjibyakuya stories, im gnna be honest. I like the pairing but i prefer seme byakuya since, to me personally at least, doesnt seem the type to relish control as so. But i still liked this story, I laughed at the part where byakuya thinks why doesnt she just tell everyone im an ass? -grins- i also loved the writting, very good! |
![]() ![]() This was very well written for your first. :) Good job. I liked it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT DO YOU MEAN IT WASN'T WELL WRITTEN? IT WAS AMAAAZING! you write so well! -APPLAUSE APPLAUSE!- Gaaaah i can really picture renji being a gardener _' and byakuya was great in this! i was half terrified towards the beginning that byakuya was gonna be seme and i was like noooooo. but i was reassured in the end ;D nice goin'. i expect more from you soon, oui? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it. Rather long for a one shot... You could have made a sequal, you know... because Byakuya doesnt usually stay with the people he sleeps with. \but it was good none the less. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bad Renji! You're supposed to be tending to the garden, not screwing your boss! *wags finger* lol jk |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing! although i kinda wonder what happened to Renji's cut, but that aside i LOVE it! XD having Rukia as his assistant is refreshing from the usual bro n sis combo. and having the spongebob joke and the boxer hint put in there was so cool! |
![]() ![]() ![]() xD Amazingly awesome. x3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I very much enjoyed that. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well miss you told me to read it and it was really good, I thought I wasn't going to like it ( cough cough cuz the paring) but it was good and funny keep going with your fan fics! And for the love of god hurry editing my story bitchface or I swere to god I will make you read all the twilight saga! |
![]() ![]() Very, very nice job on this! I love it . Keep up the good work mkawy, I'll go read more of your stories now. |
![]() ![]() amazing story! i hope you will write more stories like this cuz it was pretty hot 8D! hehe xP |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely one of my favoritest [if that was a word] Renji x Byakuya stories. Most likely the best one. You kept them in character for the most part [though i dont have a problem with OCC either]. It was sexy; I loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not usually an AU fan but this was surprisingly good. Great job. keep up the good work . |