Reviews for Father and Son |
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simpson-yaoi chapter 1 . 8/26/2015 He is you son, dude. That so horrible and creepy |
simpson-yaoi chapter 2 . 8/26/2015 That so sad |
scythe657 chapter 2 . 4/16/2013 I think the structure of the story was good, even though, I don't like uke!Light... |
pokemaster101 chapter 2 . 1/31/2012 Omg Soichiro... Poor Light-chan...8( L's such a sweetie! - Lol Mello and Matt XD Go Sachiko go! Where's Sayu? XD Watari! 8D Keep it up! 8DDDDD |
shikamaruchick988 chapter 2 . 7/17/2011 The father disturbed me yet again but the Light POV was great. I like this chapter more than the first :) Great story! |
ArtLovingTeaAddict chapter 2 . 7/12/2011 That was strangely beautiful and sad at the same time. |
Honoka-Chan chapter 2 . 7/12/2011 lol you are deemed worthy xP this is very well written i hope you continue it xD |
Honoka-Chan chapter 1 . 7/12/2011 Creepy...but awesome xD |
EreAsha chapter 1 . 11/5/2010 Uhh. No ofence but that was kinda sick. Good story telling though. |
Masked Hatter chapter 1 . 9/26/2010 ZOMG! That was intense! I was like seriously freaking out when I read it! GREAT JOB! It's really quite a unique story! The only thing I have to say is that a few times you forgot some punctuation, or didn't capitalize Light's name - although that is quite understandable seeing as it is usually not a proper noun. Anyway, I think you should write it from Light's perspective! I'd defiantly read it! _! I look forward to seeing it! |
Blanca 'the' Angel Loveless chapter 1 . 4/25/2010 ya kno whats sad is that I was looking far a story like this...write more pritty please? -Blanca |
Mad for Beyond Birthday chapter 1 . 4/11/2010 Please...write it in Light's POV? And maybe even L's? That would give sufficient backstory to it. |
dadou chapter 1 . 3/15/2010 Oh god, this was awsome... O.o.. IM like not even freaking out with lots of exclamations and congratz because im stunned. This is verY VERY well written, to get that insight in the mind of the characters. REALLY im TOTALLY dying for Lights POV story.. actually i think i would enjoy it even more and thats a lot. A one shot is always so little PLEASE WRITE U know? this is so excellent i think u probably havent received more reviews because u have activated this thingy that none other than log-inned users (people with an account here) can revieW. I had to login to review u see? its called "anonimous reviews disabled" Again .. congratz |
Loreyulia chapter 1 . 12/12/2009 Wow... That was amazing, creepy, but amazing! Excellent job ruby, you never dissappoint! |
iluvbeyondbirthday chapter 1 . 11/27/2009 This is so sick and dark,but it's interesting!I would like to see the story with Light. |