Reviews for Der Strom
Hareta5 chapter 1 . 5/18/2019
My friend, Ima need you to write more JoJo's bizarre adventure stories cause that was just gorgeous. Like I freaking cried. I love how you integrated it into the original story, and how just real they felt with each other. Like I was JUST getting over Kakyoin lol and this just brought me right back, and I mean that in a good way. Like you got me to feel emerged in this world again but from a different perspective and that's amazing. I hope you still right cause you're amazing!
paradoxScholar chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
Hey dunno if you still come onto this site but your fic was great! Cheers!
livingspace chapter 1 . 9/20/2017
OH MY GOD, WHY DID YOU WRITE MAN SEX PORN OF JOJO?! THAT'S TOTALLY NOT RIGHT!
ameranthus13 chapter 4 . 4/5/2017
my soooooouuuuul! I need a mega- huge hug right about now because I did not survive that last chapter AT ALL! I have to slow clap this out though for all the emotions that happened! when Kakyoin said "love you" to jotaro, I could feel my heart stop because I knew. plus I'm so happy that I waited until I finished the series to read this. This was such beautiful work and I loved it all...my tears just slipped out...like I could be smiling and tears would roll down my face and then turn into a huge sob fest and nothing could stop this waterfall on my face...which actually did happen btw.
anyways, off with my rant and into the actual review. the details were amazing and the length of the chapters were incredible! I just wanted to note that some sentences seemed incomplete, meaning that a word should have been added and it would be complete. but that was very rare so you don't have to worry about it. that's all I have
anyways! thank you for writing this! it was such a fantastic and bittersweet read, keep up the amazing work!
cheebs chapter 4 . 8/14/2016
HOW DARE YOU HURT ME IN THIS WAY
but thanks for this. its really well-written. its also aged well, considering its a couple years since finished now. and hey, the animes out now, so we get to see kak's body battered into a water tower fully animated, just like jotaro :'). this killed me btw.
Moo chapter 4 . 12/19/2015
My feels. ;-;

There are 2 spelling errors on the first chapter. If I remember correctly, there is one redundant statement on the third chapter. Something along the lines of "...gasping Kakyoin let out in gasps." You could omit one of the gasps. XD

Other than that, this was beautifully written. The smex scenes were so- *blushes.* I really do love this. I will always cherish Kakyoin. Fuck you, Dio!

P.s. Caesar and Joseph... they are my otp. I saw what you did there. '_
Lee Clawda chapter 4 . 9/28/2015
OH MY GOD!
I really shouldn't have read this the day after finishing Stardust Crusaders, I am now a ball of raw feels. I really should have learned after part 2 to not sail my ships so vigorously in JoJo.
Very, very, well written however, you had me 'aw'-ing, laughing, and getting hot n' bothered, and then crying, a lot of crying.
Toats gonna check out your other stuffs.
Karagna chapter 1 . 8/8/2015
OHMYGOSH YASSSSS THIS FIC

This is my first time watching JoJo's Bizarre Adventure and when Avdol died I died too. So naturally I came here to find comforting fanfic and I found this beauty over here.

This soothed my nerves a lot. And I'm saving the rest for tomorrow in case there are extra feels waiting for me.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/3/2015
I guess Kakyoin will always be... Cherrished.
Mar-chan chapter 4 . 5/26/2015
Well, I couldn't sleep, so I searched for something to read. It was 5am, and I read this story's summary. I thought "This will be a long and sad story, don't read it before going to school, baka"... guess what, I read it and I almost went crying to school, haha. It was just... so beautiful. I love this so much. Thank you for writing this, I really enjoyed it.
Holy chapter 4 . 9/8/2014
Is it possible for you to imagine a theater full of people clapping right about now? Because that is what you deserve.

This, THIS, masterpiece is perfectly canon. The characters, the settings, the everything really! And even knowing about the finale to part three, I wanted them to be together, I wanted their happily ever after, I did ;A;!

I was about to shed tears at the end because GOD that was a beautiful send off ;v;
baahsu chapter 4 . 8/16/2014
This. was. brilliant.
I don't think I have better words for it. I'm completely astonished.

I love how you perfectly developed their relationship throughout the canon story, this is one of the things I like the most when reading a fanfic.
I had my eyes watering from the second chapter onwards, but when I got to the end of the last one, let me tell you, I had to take off my glasses or else I wouldn't be able to see anything I was reading. I was crying so much since Jotaro opened Iggy's bag that when he met Kakyoin's parents I wasn't even surprised I was sobbing.
Also the smut parts were hot, you wrote them very well.

Love the fic, added to favorites.
Bye!
n-n.-o.o chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
THIS IS SEXY AS HELL! AWESOME WORK BABE!
BucktoothedCutie chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
oh my, thank you, really, for writing this. It's been a long time for me since I read my last fanfiction, but this makes me want to get back. I just read the first part and I can't tell you how happy I am to see there are two more parts, I think you got the characters spot on! Really great work! Now i'm up for part two!
SociopathLover chapter 3 . 5/30/2011
I just read chapter four over at your lj and I'm happy I found this. I started JoJo's a couple weeks ago but I really like this pairing and I think you captured them quite well. There was a nice mix of comedy, sadness, and sexiness. I hope you come out with that epilogue.
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