Very well written.

This is beautiful. There is nothing more to say. It is simply beautiful.

Well that escalated quickly

Just out of curiosity, what made you decide to make a story in Mollie's point of view. Overall, I like what you did here. In the actual book, she was just incredibly annoying. When I read the book, I was thinking "Why the hell is Orwell writing about a bratty teenager?"

so good.

*dies from cuteness* This. Was. ADORABLE. Mollie/Boxer is so cute. :) I love the side story with the ribbon, and Mollie teaching Boxer his letters, and.. and... EVERYTHING!

Awwwh :) I love this book, and I think this pairing is just soo wonderfully perfect :D Well done!

Aww, that is so. frikkin. CUTE!

Wow! I really liked it. Good job.

that was good. Nice way to look at Mollie too

I LOVED IT MAKE MORE PLEASE!

Though I wonder about this... if Mollie had shown herself to the other animals at the end and proven Napoleon a liar, might that have ended his reign? Boxer would have backed her up, and most of the animals respected him.

Aw! This was cute! This was very true to the book, and I liked it very much! Boxer and Mollie...very cute couple! U Rock on!

Wha? Boxer is with Clover! cheater... JK lol. I'm glad you didn't kill Mollie. I;m mad that Boxer was killed in the book though. Good job!

That was brilliant. I read Animal Farm back in elementary school, and this had brought back memories of the plot. I always liked Boxer, even if he was a little workacholic.

Bravo on Molly. She was protrayed as a fussy mare in the book, but kudos on deepening her personality.