Reviews for Boy next door…
Guest chapter 30 . 10/22/2019
I’m seriously worried about the author after reading this. Nothing but misery. Avoiding misery, creating misery, inventing misery, and last but not least, completely reveling in misery.
MysterySan chapter 31 . 8/16/2017
History is repeating itself *laughs*. I absolutely loved it and very grateful that you decided to share this story with us.
KimiD chapter 31 . 4/16/2014
Just wondering if 9you0 are ever gonna do the sequel...
KimiD chapter 23 . 4/14/2014
I get that he was making a point but like she says, why ruin her night? He could have made the point in a different way. He says he "respects" her, okay, but again, he is always throwing out mixed signals to her... hurting does not prove a point. It makes her suspious like her comment about skankya, is he screwing someone else and just stringing her along "saying" he respects her... i feel so frustrated for her! He is who she leans on, he went after her asking about why they can't be friends, persuing her... and yet he keeps backing off! keeping her at arms length and when she pulls aways hurt and confused he steps up to reel her in, as she said, only to push away again. then htis last question, AGAIN, 'Bella, I've been thinking... why me?' . /Game.? 'Every memory I have is with you.' is that good? a regret? What? Her question is valid.. "Why me, Edward?" Does he really want to be with her OR is she just convenient?
KimiD chapter 22 . 4/14/2014
Maybe it is just me... but it sometimes feels like he is playing Bella... he skirts around her questions, or ignores her questions altogether... He is always putting her off as far as sex is concerned. What red-blooded American boy turns down sex that often? I mean really He always tells her he wants to wait, to make it special, he Really wants her but then it really seems like it is easy for him to stop. Now that he is 18 it kinda makes sense... but not when they were both the same age. And then tells her he does not want her to come with him to Chicago, now does he mean ever? or just until she i s 18 too and can go with not interference with their parents? I mean there are sooo so many mixed signals coming from him how is she supposed to feel or know what he is thinking? He never seems to give her a straight answer to or for anything. Like he is dangling forever but keeps pulling it back to see how far she will jump... thoroughly confused...
alisapay1 chapter 30 . 4/11/2014
Um, where's the sequel 'Boys Next Door'? I checked your profile and it's not there! What happened? Please let me know! Mwah!
alisapay1 chapter 31 . 4/11/2014
Loved this story! So much! Thanks for writing it and now I'm gonna check out your other stuff! Mwah!
Cindy chapter 29 . 9/3/2013
Sorry, but this story is too damn depressing. At first it was all the constant teen stuff and then you completely destroyed the characters. There is no way on Earth that two people could stay together after all of this. They never got to be happy even once! You had me in the beginning, but lost me after that! Good writing, but people want a happy ending...we get enough crap in the real world!
michigangal0223 chapter 3 . 8/28/2013
these two are funny
michigangal0223 chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
wow they could have some hot sex haha
Ogey-Ogey-Ogey chapter 31 . 7/3/2013
Hi Taintedvile,

I came across this story whilst randomly looking for another fan fic to read, and I have to say that I literally haven't been able to stop reading yours!
This story is really amazing, the way you write is incredible and easy to follow, and also I love how this story differs from others I've read; this story involves a lot of dark issues which I think is great as it makes the story seem more real...I'm sure you'd agree that life isn't like a fairy tale and it does have it's up's and down's.
This really is one of the best stories I've read by far, and I cannot wait to read some more stories from you.
Thank you for giving a different side of Edward and Bella, I thought they were amazing!
Love, Rhiannon. (A.K.A Ogey-Ogey-Ogey)
chosmer chapter 31 . 5/18/2013
This story deserves far more reviews. I read liked it.
Debbie3850 chapter 30 . 4/28/2013
Thank you so much for writing and sharing such a great story!...You have such a way with words I'm always right there with your character's feeling every emotion there feeling and your chapter songs were a perfect addition...loved it! :)
Erikajo chapter 2 . 4/26/2013
Nice angst!
Erikajo chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
Wow. Little bit of animosity there. :)
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