The most epic chapter I have even read!

Yes please!

rofl so funny!

Oh man! This story was so bad...it's good!

Seriously, I love how you've included almost everything that anyone shouldn't do in a fan fiction. My favorite being the Mary Sues, especially since I see a lot of fan fics that involve Transformers fans being transported into the shows or movies. Also the authors note in chapter 19 cause I hate when people do that! One more thing that does get annoying is when people say things like "I'm not gonna update til I get 10 reviews!"

I'm not gonna go on and on, so I'll conclude by saying that this story would be the perfect guideline and example of what not to do in a fan fiction. Other fandoms could use this as well.

To summarize my view of this story so far- OH MAN OH GOD OH MAN. look it up on YouTube and die laughing, because I need revenge for going to the doctor with convulsions of mad giggles.

DARN YOU FORTUNE COOKIE!Wait. Where did the quicksand come from?

You are truly the master.

I think you may have identified and successfully mocked almost every characteristic of the 'bad fic'; except perhaps the irritating tendancy amongst certain 'authors' to continuously refer to all characters by their respective hair colours, which they often invent names for (eg. "The brunette looked srsly at the equally srs 'silvernette'."). Because apparently adding 'nette' to a word makes it a hair colour.

... (*note strategic use of ellipsis)

Humanity, I weep for thee.

Wow. Praise for you turned into me unleashing my rage there.

Apologies.

What I of course meant to say was keep up the good work...

;)

I demand more Motormaster/Frenzy. Hottest pairing evar!

I just spent the last 20 chapters laughing like a retard.

This story is weird, insane, random, illogical, and all other related adjectives. Fortunately, that's exactly what I like.

However, when you listen to Frontier Psychiatrist, by The Avalenches, while reading, it takes on a whole new level of bizzarity (Is that even a word? I think it should be a word; it sums up the fic pretty well).

Now you're doing it right!

My poor brain fried like five chapters ago...

Epic chapter is epic.

Sweet! I LOVE this chapter! :D

:D

:D

:D

D: But it took too long to read...

what chapter?