I read the whole fanfic it was soooo nice I was smiling the whole timej

This is really good! I hope you continue!

Still awesomeness! Cant wait for the next chapter!

Colossus cant cover others with metal, but ill bet you get that from the X-Men the last stand trailer. Simply put, that girl was Rouge. She absorbed his powers and covered herself

i love lance and kitty together!

i hope you continue with the storey.

Is this the last chapter?

This was an amazing story great job! ) I really enjoyed seeing Lance with the x men (although I really like the brotherhood).

another great chapter! how do you manage to do it with schoolwork going on? Thanks for writing again! Can't wait for more! :)

Nice new chapter, and I can't really guess what's going to happen next. INTERESTING! :D

Another great chapter :D Except one thing:

Colossus doesn't seem that rough, nor that protective of Magneto (it's more a grudging allegience) so I'm not sure if that's entirely in character...

Otherwise I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Keep going! :D

xoxo

Nice chapter. Lance is so cute :D Can't wait to read the next one!

Awwww, NICE chapter :D Poor Lance. And that was so sweet about the present. Write more soon! I'll be waiting!

yes i love a dose of pure Lancitty fluff!. Just careful with the spelling and the grammar.

I really quite like your story so far, please keep going? :D

Yay! Another chapter! This story is really great, I love the fluff. Just a little constructive criticism though; Kitty's power is phasing through solid matter, rather than facing. It's kind of confusing since I don't *think* it's a real word, at least not when used in that way. Kitty's just really good at coming up with names for things. Like Lockheed. XD