I think you should continue this storyline, since you did it so well with actual Smallville series...I really like your take and direction...and am very curious to see this go further.

Also, I noticed that not all of your stories are on here, you really should bring them over to share!

Love this

That was a great story!

Well done! I was still looking for a Martha and Perry thing that would tell me if they were together or not, either way I loved the ending! Clark and Lois are meant to be! Fantastic!

I love this story, I am so sad it's over. Sequel?

That was awesome, emotional but really good. Please please tell me Martha and Perry are together in the final chapter and that you bring Clark back because he is not supposed to go. Update again soon please!

AND THERE'S MORE! I know there is and I can't wait to read what else you post for this story! I loved how you stuck to the episode but also added in your own style and ideas. Great job and update when you can!

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That was great! I remember that episode, that was amusing the whole way through. HOLY MOLY, THAT MEANS MARTHA AND PERRY ARE NEXT! I can't wait to read what Clark writes about that, HAHA. Update again when you can!

Sorry, for not reviewing lately! I love how you write this like it is an actual diary and we finally get find out how Clark feels. Clark is also really dirty minded, but he has someone he loves so thats bound to happen. I hope you write one were find out about what Clark was thinking about when Martha came home with Perry, there was so much more to it I know there was.

i like this story, you the first writing that blames chloe for some of the bad stuff, instead of just blameing clark

Please update soon I am really looking forward to the next chapter

I really love you story telling through Clark just wish you had more reafing it's a real treat

I like superfreaky Clark

Awwww, Clark is so sweet. I love how he blushes and how you describe his love for Lois.

I enjoyed this chpater very much, especially the end, je,je.