Aww, really cute. You captured hwo Holmes felt perfectly, nice job!

I should read some more of your stories

AW, that was sweet! Great job with the details! Loved it.

Ah! That was really cute! Great work!

Sorry, that review was meant for another story!

I loved your story. It was so sad :( Keep up the good work.

How cute But sad too, Holmes being all alone in his rooms, waiting for Watson.

I loved how you managed to capture how much Holmes depends on Watson to keep him going and how much the thought of losing hurted him!

Great job!

Awesome job, mate! :) loved how you took where

the two were emotionally at, at movie's end.

and then you ratcheted it up another notch.

great characterizations AND great plot as well, as

i could TOTALLY see this happening shortly after the

film ended and a new case had begaun for Holmes, with

Watson there to pick up the pieces, so-to-speak.

Bravo! :D

~Sharma

y keep such a great story a one shot?

wow sad but good nice job

Whoa. Sherlock and John (I LIKE using their first names...) have always had a very close relationship, and you shaped it well here. Keep writing!

I loved that so, so much. The tone was perfect, and I really felt like I was FEELING Holmes' character. I think you really nailed his character. Like the "Bleed harder!" and the "Great, now I'm hearing his voice" down to the sadder moments about actually living.

Aww. :) I like it! :D

Bwahaha - "Then he made a concerted effort to bleed *harder* damn it" Lol - i loved that line.

And i love that Watson came back. I can see that happening. Poor Holmes. How could Watson ever have considered that the detective could look after himself?

Good work. I liked how you had Holmes save himself because watson wasnt coming, then you had watson show up anyway. It showed a kind of... angsty independence.

Love Bundi

" “Watson." Holmes said in a voice that said “I am very confused why are you here” “Hello” and “I just fought a brutal murderer, hung from a tall building by a small rope, climbed up on my own and then strolled home and I think I may be a little beaten up”."

Best sentence in the world. Love the situation. But some odd part of me always finds a way to keep Mary with Watson... and I just might have to write for this myself seeing as everyone neglects the no-fanbase characters :D

That was really touching. I'm nearly in tears. Boo, Mary, we don't like you. Holmes and Watson belong together. :)

OMG this is so cute. I love the style, how you spoke the thoughts of Holmes! It's awesome! *hugs*